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Stan

There once was a man named Stan.
His rump was too big for his van.
He sat down on his couch.
It yelled out a loud ouch.
This made him feel less of a man.

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  1. Date: 7/31/2013 3:12:00 PM
    Funny, funny, funny!! A well-deserved featured writing! Congrats to you!...Milt

  1. Date: 7/21/2013 4:47:00 PM
    Poor couch!..Don't blame it for protesting...Hilarious limerick with correct syllable count and good meter...Congratulations Marisa - Tim

    Moynihan Avatar Marisa Moynihan
    Date: 7/21/2013 5:35:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, it was a fun poem to make.
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 2:58:00 AM
    congrats on win Shadow x smiles

    Moynihan Avatar Marisa Moynihan
    Date: 7/21/2013 5:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you:)
  1. Date: 7/21/2013 1:28:00 AM
    haha, I had to chuckle reading that his rump let out the ouch. Good one, and congrats for your win.

    Moynihan Avatar Marisa Moynihan
    Date: 7/21/2013 5:34:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty :)
  1. Date: 7/20/2013 11:04:00 PM
    Thank you all for the wonderful comments. Its a pleasure to have you all read my poem and to read all of yours as well. :)

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 9:22:00 PM
    Very funny and clever limerick. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Marisa, A good winning poem. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/20/2013 7:18:00 PM
    SUCH a cute, funny, clean limerick! As it should be :) Congrats on your win in my contest, my dear!

    Moynihan Avatar Marisa Moynihan
    Date: 7/20/2013 11:03:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you for picking me. :)
  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Marisa, , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Hello Marisa-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 4:05:00 AM
    - Hi Marisa, a fun poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:08:00 PM
    lol...this made me chuckle.. :D

    Moynihan Avatar Marisa Moynihan
    Date: 7/9/2013 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    :)
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Aww, poor Stan. Probably more pity for his van. lol This was cute! :)

    Moynihan Avatar Marisa Moynihan
    Date: 7/9/2013 3:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you. :)