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Unbelievable Journey - any subject contest

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Unbelievable Journey - any subject contest


My mind took the unbelievable  journey
To the reservoir of life
Taking in the mystical  memory
Of the time I walked from strife

Remembering the quadrivial
not sure which track I must avoid
Til i heard the distant voices
Chanting  a pericope in the wind

It was then that I saw it
Lying on the earth
A ligure shining but not brightly
Not showing its worth.



Using the words, : unbelievable, mystical, pericope, ligure, reservoir, quadrivial




Penned 9 July 2013


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  1. Date: 7/27/2013 8:05:00 PM

    Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Seren! Always, Annalise

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/28/2013 7:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Annalise many thx for your congrats...Seren
  1. Date: 7/27/2013 9:45:00 AM

    Seren,.... Congratulations, in the any subject contest... have yourself a sweet day... LINDA

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Linda ....Seren
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 7:53:00 PM

    Congrats on your win Seren, enjoyed xxx

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 12:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rose ....Seren
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Seren, Congratulations on your awesome win. love ~ SKAT~ ...

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 12:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks SKAT ....Seren
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 5:51:00 PM

    Seren one fabulous rhyme, a well deserve win. Congratulations! Warm Smiles, Connie

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/27/2013 12:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Connie .....Seren
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 6:45:00 AM

    Very simply done and explained. Congratulations, sometimes less is more.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/26/2013 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    lol Richard, glad i didnt have to make it long one
  1. Date: 7/26/2013 3:40:00 AM

    Hi Seren Congrats on your win in my contest ty for entering my contest Shadow x smiles

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/26/2013 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Shadow, wasnt easy words you chose ...Seren
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:41:00 PM

    I'm standing at life's quadrivial holding my ligure for luck and taking a risk of creating a pericope. But I think these words have never been put together before and there is a good reason for that. The meanings are so estranged form each other as to make it difficult to put them in the same poem Good for you for trying.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/26/2013 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for stopping by Catherine...Seren
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:21:00 PM

    This is a tremendous write my friend! I truly loved reading this amazing poem this evening! What a stupendous piece, such a powerful poem, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/26/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you Russell...Seren