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MISS CALL

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Below is the poem entitled MISS CALL which was written by poet BL Devnath. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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MISS CALL

                                                        loving vibration
                                               media of hand set makes
                                                        communication

                                                   until response there
                                            gives miss call after miss call
                                                      if no reply....ugh



For contest: in show me the Funny

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:48:00 PM
    clever poetry is this, and a joy to have read it.....

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Glad to see someone else can't miss a call. I'm the same. Good luck with this in the contest. Well written poem. Anne

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 7/8/2013 12:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:57:00 AM
    - You will receive a response ....... not easy to hide away in today's "mobile world" ..... no one go on a fishing trip without mobile phone today .... Well done bl. - Luck in contest !!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 7/8/2013 11:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks my friend for visiting my page and wishing me good luck with nice comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:49:00 AM
    i can't usually handle missed calls and this piece gives the theme a sense of urgency... beautifully done, bl.... right on!..;) huggs

    Devnath Avatar BL Devnath
    Date: 7/8/2013 10:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ha ha ha, firstly smile secondly laugh...ha ha ha, my dear friend. Thanks for early comment. Loved always, bl