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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Dear Rose what what can anyone say....thank you for the bravery it took to write and share this..it might make a difference to someone who thinks they are all alone ...and give them strength

  1. Date: 7/27/2013 5:14:00 AM
    Mystic a beautiful and heartfelt poem. The strength and courage to overcome, god Bless you. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:47:00 PM
    Mystic; Congratulations with your win in Drake's Confessional contest. take care- LINDA

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 5:56:00 PM
    Rose, this really moved me. Some how within the sadness I could picture the beauty of the surroundings and the perfection of the relationship between you and Vie. Also a part of innocence that could not be touched physically remained intact. This is quite the balancing act and you have managed it with poetic grace. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:47:00 PM
    My oh my Vienna...I am assuming this is a true story because you mention your own name in the last verse...I just read Deb's heartbreaker and now it seems you have suffered the same experience...The shocking contrast in the 3rd verse made me weak in the knees...Congratulations dear friend - Tim

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:02:00 PM
    Mystic , good going in the -The Confessional- contest. CONGRATULATIONS:-) Have yourself a great day. >SKAT<

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 12:08:00 PM
    hi Vienna congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 11:12:00 AM
    very touching poem Rose...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:34:00 AM
    There is a secret pain that lives on, ....but in spite of one who survives, is a spirit that cannot be denied, and a wealth of kindness that has been learned from one's one experience. (If I read this as a true story)

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 8:06:00 AM
    I see the words "Vienna", "Vie" and something told me if was you who wrote this...damn, I'm good! Congrats on winning Honorable mention on my "Confessional" contest! =D Once again, you pull out all the stops when it comes to matters of the heart & living for the moment. Excellent!

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 2:23:00 PM
    You are a wonderful poet, beautifully written Peter

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:02:00 AM
    Wow, what a powerful write my friend, I love the alluding to the city, that was cleverly done! I truly loved reading this dynamic poem this afternoon! What a pleasant piece, a piece with a powerful message interwoven within it, Great Work!!