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If I ask you to love me

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If I ask you to love me

If I ask you to love me,
Would you still smile for me?
Or perhaps you already want to hide,
Because our friendship will already apart.

Don't blame me, if I am telling this,
I didn't plan to let my heart to be now it is,
I don't seek words from you to be bind,
By colorful hue like the rainbow as sign.

If I'm asking you to love me,
I am not commanding you to please me,
I'm just telling why do I feel like this,
And not expecting to be your miss.

Maybe, I'll be sad, if you don't want to see,
At least you already know, this I keep inside in me.

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  1. Date: 10/21/2013 4:07:00 AM
    nice..

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 4:24:00 PM
    A very warm and heartfelt poem. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 2:40:00 PM
    Jelina, love the poem, ....... congratulations!!! Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 6:27:00 AM
    Jelina, congratulations , Thank you for the lovely entry.:-) When you have time enjoy the winners and my sweet blog * Called "The Liberty Bell" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15780&PoetID=18720 Have yourself a nice and beautiful Sunday... PS... stop by my newest poem if you like. "Summer Rain" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=498166 XOX-love Linda

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 11:25:00 PM
    a true way of expression. Love is a gift that lifts up the heart... hope you won't become sad... wishing you well always~ Linda

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:16:00 AM
    One of the best declarations I've read on love. Though, be sure to edit "felt like this" to "feel like this", it'll flow better in your message. Wonderful job!

    Rhian Avatar Jelina Rhian
    Date: 7/9/2013 7:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for taking time to read and leave comments on my piece.,I appreciated it. This is my entry to your contest: confessional, but you already commented..,it is still ok to add this as my entry?..thanks..jeline