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What Did You Do To Me Last Night

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What Did You Do To Me Last Night

the sun was sinking and shadows growing 
around me 
sleepless nights have become my constant companion 
my eyes burn as I wait for him 
restless and sad
hoping for peace to find me soon 
deep in my solitude keeping my heart awake all night 
finally the sandman sprinkled magic in my eyes 
images came rushing in 
I found you standing there 
with your special smile and sparkling eyes 
waiting for me 
filling me with your warmth 
if I had never dreamt 
I would have never known
the awe and wonder before me 
emotions stir these late nights
I feel young and loved 
behind a blanket of visions 
a memory brings forth a tear 
as the new day arrives 
bright full of hope and relief 
what did you do to me last night

Contest: last night
nov.9/13

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  1. Date: 8/30/2013 2:20:00 AM

    YOU DON'T KNOW....YET? Ha ha....i've been reading a few of your Contest entrees...You have that great ability to be able to write so vividly and bright...about any subject ...that challlenges you! Just like this one.

  1. Date: 8/9/2013 7:33:00 PM

    awesome win Betty, ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;SKAT

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 9:37:00 PM

    Hi Betty, enjoyed your late night poem. CONGRATULATIONS!!! :-) :-) :-) in Nathan's contest... always Linda

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 8:25:00 PM

    congrats. nate

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 8:05:00 PM

    Betty, this would have made a good entry for the sleepless nights.. however, late night is as perfect. i feel as if this poem, is from a real personal experience. glad you shared with us...xox...LINDA

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:57:00 AM

    Woah wow begins soulfully but ends superbly in hapiness tears! A remarkable poem, pal, take care.:)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:40:00 PM

    This was very touching. The heart skipping beats in this poem. Nicely done!