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Powerful String

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Below is the poem entitled Powerful String which was written by poet Skyler Swan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Powerful String

As I walked by
You didn't even bother to say Hi
We cross each other path
I didnt even try to feel your wrath
But either way we still kept quiet for a month
But i'm still not done

You still haven't forgotten our situation 
This is just a hesitation

Please forget the past 
I still haven't forgotten the memories we had

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 7:35:00 PM
    I felt the feeling of abondment when i read this. Very heartfelt and genuine stuff here. GREAT job. *high five* I rate this a 6 and you are my fav poet.

    Swan Avatar Skyler Swan
    Date: 7/8/2013 7:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank You so much ^_^ i really enjoyed your poem too ;) ~<3 Sky (:
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 7/8/2013 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    abandonment* sorree
    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 7/8/2013 7:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow...man I can emphasize .