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Mystic Road

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Mystic Road

In the mist a young boy cried
From down the mystic forest road.
He shared truths his years belied.

I crept close to find that I’d
Never seen this strange abode.
In the mist a young boy cried.

From the road I stepped to hide
Fearful what this might forebode.
He shared truths his years belied.

I whispered low and he replied,
“As your past it’s truth I owe”.
In the mist a young boy cried.

He stepped forward to confide,
“It’s from true love that rich life flows”.
He shared truths his years belied.

For a moment we were side by side,
But then to yesterday he strode.
In the mist a young boy cried
He shared truths his years belied.

Rhyme battle round 4

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  1. Date: 4/14/2014 8:18:00 AM
    The brevity of the line served your content well, I'm sure you new and considered this, you truly have a full tool box now and it is wonderful to see you shine as you use it, congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 4/6/2014 9:59:00 AM
    Excellent form and content, congrats on your 1st place win Craig xxx

  1. Date: 4/6/2014 5:33:00 AM
    Simply Stunning Craig. Well deserved winner. Hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 4/6/2014 2:29:00 AM
    A true gem indeed and it deserved this place in the contest. A brilliant write! Congrats on your victory!!

  1. Date: 4/5/2014 12:13:00 AM
    Congrats. Craig, loved it , had to read it twice to allow the words to really sink in, so perfect for this form...Seren

  1. Date: 4/4/2014 11:27:00 AM
    This is a beautiful write Craig; no wonder it placed right at the top of the contest. congrats once again. // paul

  1. Date: 4/4/2014 10:12:00 AM
    I'll tell you what, Craig; these are some outstanding rhymes! It also flows very smoothly, which I believe many people have difficulty doing with this form. Well deserving of the first prize.

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 10:17:00 PM
    HEY CRAIG, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 4/3/2014 1:06:00 PM
    Craig, loving this winning list.... PD

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 9:11:00 PM
    Villanelle will always be my favorite form and you nailed it! I love your poetry Craig, always have, always will! Well done. :)

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 2:32:00 PM
    Makes me think of Nate King Coles song about the enchanted boy. Congratulations on your win although when I read it I was not aware you had entered it in a contest. Soup mail

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 4:27:00 PM
    Craig, thanks so much for visiting my poetry and a big congratulations to you on your big win with this amazing poem, constance

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:48:00 AM
    Congratulations Craig on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:36:00 AM
    Craig, congratulations on your win... I am impressed with your mastery of this form.... Jake

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 8:48:00 AM
    Craig I remember this one. I thought it would place well in this contest. Congrats on your fantastic win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:23:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win, Craig. This is lovely.. :)

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Congratulations on your no. 1 Craig. Proud to share with you. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 3:39:00 PM
    an awesome fantasy poem... congrats :-) love LINDA

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 2:11:00 PM
    Craig congratulation on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 10:13:00 AM
    Congrats, Craig.... :)