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CONFESSION AND ADMISSION

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Below is the poem entitled CONFESSION AND ADMISSION which was written by poet BL Giri. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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CONFESSION AND ADMISSION

                                              Confession and admission 
                                  sometimes resembles near about the same
                                           So what do I name for a deed 
                                           I did earlier when I was young 
                                            A girl loved me much and I too
                                    but neither I met her nor she in any day
                                            She knew I am a married man
                                          her style attitudes attracted me
                                             I knew there's no sin to love
                                      so I loved her much very much simply
                                             Many years gone on the way
                                             I told her indirectly about me 
                                        that I am helpless can do nothing
                                     After a long period she is now married
                                           I admit that I still love her really
                                 I confess that I lost her valuable time for love

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  1. Date: 7/8/2013 2:39:00 PM
    BL, I am sure this happens to many people. but I am glad that you missed the opportunity and stayed true to your mate. You did the right thing!!

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    Date: 7/8/2013 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for praising me with comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 12:36:00 PM
    Bl, Some things are never ment to happen . Sad and profound write. Anne

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    Date: 7/8/2013 12:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks my friend for your nice comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 12:05:00 PM
    WOW! This is some conffession. Only God knows why things happen. Sometimes things are not meant to be. Thanks for answering my question. I only had one daughter and God knows that I love her dearly, but she messed up her life. She is just now turning her life around and for that I'm greatful..... Lucilla

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    Date: 7/8/2013 8:56:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    My lovely friend, thanks a lot for your comment. God always bless your family all the time. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:01:00 AM
    beautiful descriptions with amazing imagery, bl... this is such a fresh nostalgic write; I enjoyed it a lot---sad yet lovely... :) huggs

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    Date: 7/7/2013 11:08:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks a lot for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl