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EMPOWERING INNOCENCE

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EMPOWERING INNOCENCE

written 21st June 2013


A 'single'.. rose grows with purity, into a field, en-fenced
 from that 'moment' it buds, watch...as its passion, and grace.. intertwine
It begins to bloom, with such confidence
 showing off.. its elegance, with 'complete' dominance
For you are left... 'totally' unaware of an, 'entire' field of daisies, swaying.... such poetry
 such passion, and grace.. still exists in the heart, of humanity
The worlds future... 'completely' relies on 'peace' to become heard
 but how far has...man let it go, our hearts hold hope, for the same entity
Peace, love and harmony
 for those "who" choose to believe
Jesus freed, the curse we received by 'Adam' and 'Eve'
 they have found, love and peace
Taking it upon themselves, they help... the next man, to be 'free'
 within God's own time, we 'will' see, heaven on earth
For it is 'still' a gift... we all receive, at the hour of our birth
 


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  1. Date: 7/19/2013 10:04:00 PM

    What you have said in your poem is very true Denise, the world really is wonderful and people need to show love to one another, your work is going strength to strength, you will be better than I am one day, I will have to lift my game to stay in front of you, good luck on your writing, you have the passion and determination to succeed. your friend. John

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 10:48:00 PM

    YOU WRITE BEAUTIFUUUUUULLY! Love your STYLE....!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 4:59:00 AM

    Hi Denise, your poems are improving, this was very good I like the way you said Jesus freed Adam and Eve's sins, you are really shaping up as a poet. I will follow you through your poems, I feel you will become a top poet in time. John

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 9:43:00 AM

    Hi Denise, well written with only minor misspellings. Your style has improved much. My compliments again. You have cleverly understood that a poem cannot be written with the same language adopted for telephone messages or using slang. This poem is gentle and full of love for nature. You may improve much also te contents by using fantasy, passion and language!