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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:56:00 PM
    I love how direct you are on this matter,, sometimes I find myself staring at day, without knowing where the night went... Linda

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 4:19:00 PM
    There goes your intricate precious mind Yasmin another well deserved win, congrats my sweets xxx

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 3:27:00 PM
    Sleep tight tonite and every night sweet Jasmine...From your funny and playful comments it is obvious that you are back stronger than ever!... SO thankful for that...Forever your faithful friend - Tiny Timid Timmy

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 7:59:00 AM
    I expected to see your poem on the winners list. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:30:00 AM
    another gem, my maeeey... .. a big hurrah on your win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/22/2013 10:07:00 PM
    My huge heartfelt congratulations on your great win my dear friend, Yasmin. It’s an outstanding poem indeed which really deserved its shining win. Thank you so much for giving me your precious gem in my contest and for your support. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 6:30:00 AM
    You have portrayed the experience well. I hope you have found the rest you seek. My wife suffers from insomnia and in the last year I have experienced it as well. It gives me an appreciation for what she has gone through.

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 6:37:00 AM
    It's the same here, Yasie, no sun, no moon, for more than a month now. It's so chill you get good sleep, not the sleepless nights you described so well !!

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:16:00 AM
    Just wanted to add that I know where you're comin from here dear lady...I was up four straight nights a few weeks after losing someone near and dear...I almost went over the edge...As a matter of fact I DID go over but something caught me...I wrote a poem called 'The Force' about it if you'd care to check it out...Have a great day sweet Jasmine - Tim

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 8:02:00 PM
    This is exactly how it feels, Yasmin! (love the reference to a salad bowl......yes, indeed......I toss and turn just like that! Nicely captured!

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 3:07:00 PM
    you capture it well, Yasmin. I feel like this too sometimes. Nice seeing you post this new poem recently. luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 1:19:00 PM
    sweet !!! warm wishes , Saanvi

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 4:42:00 PM
    A sleepless night seems to never end. Time slows down making it a long long night. I cam relate to your stupendous outlet. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:57:00 PM
    Good luck Yasmin, deep... and amazing...PD

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 11:48:00 AM
    - Nighttime hours creep slowly .... counting hours .. minutes ... I know well these nights. - A well written poem my friend Yasmin! - Good luck in the contest. - Hope everything is fine with you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:38:00 AM
    Yes, it is strange that unwanted thoughts govern our sleepless nights, amplified by exhaustion.... Lovely write, Yas. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:22:00 AM
    Heady lines keep me half- awake, half-asleep in the trance of your lines, mareey... utterly divine with a language beyond the mundane and ordinary... hope you are fine!.... priya huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 3:34:00 AM
    Amazing couplet Jasmine (That is what I will call you from now on) Your two up to five syllable rhyming ability amazes me...You seem to be feeling better these days...Hope so!...Please check out my comment on Andrea's poem about India...

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 8:29:00 PM
    Wow, double wow, I am amazed at this tremendous write, I am mesmerized at this enlightening poem this evening! What a phenomenal piece, such a wonderful poem, Great Work!!