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Goddess of Mars

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Goddess of Mars

Goddess of Mars and of
all things desolate

I chart desperate needs
I measure hatred

Alone in a red filled 
valley of despair

Hot winds lift and
spiral my hair

I am not there
I am the barest whisper

My talons scrape the blue
confines of heaven

while my death - filled constellations
spin fatally in frozen orbits

I am not there- nor is infiniy

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  1. Date: 10/12/2013 4:57:00 AM

    I feel the despair and sadness in this one. Wonderfully done =)

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 3:26:00 PM

    Hi SuZ. You have something valuable there that needs expansion. I liked it a lot. Congrats. :) G.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 5:02:00 PM

    Interesting lines that you have penned..It has some unique and creative concepts within its perimeters..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your comments are encouraging..Sara

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:17:00 PM

    So sad! but beautifully so. typo in last word, sweetie.

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:13:00 PM

    "I am the barest whisper", you certainly weren't a whisper in this piece. Gripping end!