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Stardust

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Stardust

Stardust

Stardust  so vast,  so high  see-must
Stardust  robust, moved by no gust
Stardust on earth made of clay,
With forms and names, on display
Shining, though, in ways varied,
On cute mortal frames, carried
Stardust  so vast,  so high  see-must
Stardust robust, moved by no gust.


S.Jagathsimhan Nair,  6 jul 2013
For Nette’s ‘Stardust’
Form: Octelle (8 lines/ syllables:8-8-7-7-7-7-8-8/ rhyme:aa,bb,cc,aa First and last couplets identical)

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  1. Date: 9/4/2013 9:38:00 AM
    Nice imagery created.

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 2:39:00 PM
    Hi, Jag, how are you doing today? I enjoy finally seeing your STardust poem. Some great images. I think you mean a "must-see" and indeed such a sight would be awesome to see.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 7:11:00 AM
    This is very nice. Wish you luck in contest... Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem.... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 2:17:00 AM
    - Pleased to read your beautiful poem Jag. - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:19:00 AM
    Nicely penned Jag.Enjoyed this from you.

    Mohammed Avatar Mustapha Mohammed
    Date: 7/7/2013 7:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Penned I meant sorry.
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:49:00 PM
    Well done, Jag. you have created a masterful entry for the contest.... Good luck, my friend..... Jake

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 12:35:00 PM
    sweet hello, jag... thanks!...:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Nicely done, great rhythm and rhyme.