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Red Sun

**Sun Tan**

Forceful ray printing dark skin
Sunbathe, aquarium sky
Peaceful trace beautiful line 
Sun comes alive
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**Hourglass Horizon**

We sit embracing sweet time
Beautiful amber lit eyes
Red dawn mist, loving moment
Holding mommy's hand
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CONTEST: Red Sun
SPONSOR: Russell Sivey
7-5-13

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  1. Date: 3/23/2014 11:29:00 AM

    PD. just revisiting these. I do love sunny poems.

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 1:08:00 PM

    PD, I forgot how to have multiple contests open at the same time. Please explain to me how to do so. It has something to do with finalizing, but not locking the contest?

  1. Date: 3/17/2014 11:34:00 PM

    Linda, your word choices and description are both very unique. Those two factors make your work interesting to read.

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 3:29:00 PM

    Hi Linda, I don't know the form, to be honest I don't know much forms. I can always say what I personally like and this I like. I know, I always say it, your writes are always interesting. Your visions are always painted onto your canvas in such vivid colours. One can easily imagine what you see for you put the whole vision before us. Keep that pen of yours filled with such vivid life and ever paint your canvas with the glory of life. Have a good day. Catch you later. Yours always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:05:00 AM

    Beautiful , and I just imagined all of it , and felt how wonderful and peaceful it would be ! Thanks for your inspiring comments on my poems ! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us ! Love <3 , Saanvi .....: ))

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 9:28:00 AM

    Good evening my dearest sis! Are you @ work now? Thank u so much for your lovely messages in my poem "Seventh" . So sorry if I just replied now. Was @ school & I arrived late this evening. Thanks for appreciating my new avatar/pix;)) taken @Jordan. By the way, our time is still the same here. Now is 10.30 pm . It's a morning there, right? Good morning & big hugs! I also came & peeked at my latest contest w/c hopefully to be judged this wkend. Goodnyt now! Thanks 4 evrything! Tcare! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:44:00 PM

    Read this again...BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL, PD! :) BTW...honey, please go back to my poem and read my responses to your comments....LOVE ME! :) Hugs!

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:05:00 PM

    A TRULY GIFTED POETESS ...THIS GAL WHO LONG AGO STOLE MY HEART...YOU ARE ONE OF A KIND!!! AS IS YOUR BEAUTIFUL POETRY.

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:26:00 AM

    You do very well at these. and "aquarium sky" that's awesome. Bravo!

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:14:00 PM

    a very beautiful piece of writing I wrote one myself next year four back to back red moon check it out with two eclipses in the sky I called it coming signs its very interesting I happened to find it by sheer luck thought I would write something about it before the actual event a piece of history

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:41:00 AM

    WoW Linda ..............I wish I was a writer like you !! Stunning and beautiful work !! .........xoxo~Saanvi :)))

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:24:00 AM

    "We sit embracing sweet time" --I LOVE this line.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:17:00 PM

    Congrats-- Very beautifully expressed. Brilliant attempt.

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 3:01:00 AM

    Excellent love this one, great writer love the line sunbathe aquarium sky, beautifully worded, have a blessed day, hugs sueellen

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 3:20:00 PM

    Hi, PD. I bet this won in the contest so I am here to say a big congrats. I see someone congratulated you. Awesome!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 6:56:00 PM

    Hi, my evrdearest sis! Sending you my big sweet hugs, smiles w/kisses! It's nice waking up earlier this Sun. a.m. reading once again 1 of the phenomenal writes of my loveliest & #1 fav. & greatest poet. So love the glow of the sun which lit your lovely moments.. embracing it tight. I'm sorry I’ve missed to see the winners list ahead of time. Nevertheless, I'm sending my WARMEST HEARTY b-lated CONGRATS on your super win! Thank you so much for your reply & lovely comments on my poem, the chance to join the next contest as well ;) It’s esp. a great relief to hear from you. Hoping you’ll get better soon my dearest sis. Keep sending you all my loving thoughts, prayers & lovely hugs ok. I'm always w/ u. Yes, I wish you'll be w/ me one time in my vac., how about visiting me here & my turn next time there?:)). Take care always! Have a blessed wkend to you & ur family. Lovem4evr,Leo

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 12:13:00 PM

    Sending prayers and comfort to you and family. Are you doing ok? If you need to talk you know how to get a hold of me. Thinking of you and your sister. Stay strong like I know you are. Love Colleen

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 8:03:00 AM

    I liked this one Linda and may I say that your poem add sunshine to my day.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:32:00 PM

    ..... .... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 7:50:00 PM

    I really love embracing sweet time...among the whole.....awesome Linda...congratulations

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 7/24/2013 7:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry it took so long to comment...been cutting up two downed trees all day from yet more horrible storms here last night....I live between okc and Tulsa...we had between 70-80 mile winds...said I don't have enough to do already...haha...take care...glad you are OK from your wreck....thank God!
  1. Date: 7/23/2013 6:08:00 PM

    Really enjoyed the sweet imagery in the second stanza. Your poem is vibrant. Congratulations on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 12:33:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:33:00 AM

    A very good poetry, P.D. I love how you connect the sun with your memories (or i think it is -holding mommy's hand).

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 4:33:00 PM

    Though I am new here but seeing your writing,I feel like you are a messiah sent to save with poetry..You have seduced my heart with such becoming natural erotic scenes

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 4:16:00 AM

    Your talent always brings a contender. You seem to write only for the joy of writing. I find that if you write for the joy of expression, the winning will take care of itself.... Love ya.... Jake

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 12:10:00 AM

    Another very nicely written, poetical picture ... and such a sweet sentiment to tie it up nicely with a delivery ribbon-bow ... MoonBee

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 8:27:00 PM

    wanted to stop by and say hello. I am very sick. It feels like pnemonia again. My phone isnt getting reception here at all unless I go into town. I am ready to go home. Love Colleen

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 11:49:00 AM

    its difficult to choose the right words for a short piece and have it say something meaningful but u have managed beautifully..simple, elegant ..love this..jj..

  1. Date: 7/12/2013 7:35:00 AM

    lovely moments under the sun:)

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 11:33:00 AM

    nice feeling here have you read red sun by laura ?also whats happing with your contest soup me xxxdavidscott

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