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Red Sun

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Red Sun

**Sun Tan**

Forceful ray printing dark skin
Sunbathe, aquarium sky
Peaceful trace beautiful line 
Sun comes alive
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**Hourglass Horizon**

We sit embracing sweet time
Beautiful amber lit eyes
Red dawn mist, loving moment
Holding mommy's hand
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CONTEST: Red Sun
SPONSOR: Russell Sivey
7-5-13

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  1. Date: 7/24/2014 8:22:00 AM
    I came in search of a new poem, your getting slower at posting than I am. Then I found this 'ere gem. Love that first image of sun printing... What a wonderful way with words you have.

  1. Date: 7/3/2014 7:58:00 AM
    PD. I could have sworn it was EG that wrote that poem for you. But I went to her stuff and do not see a poem that looks like it could be the one I saw. Either she took it down or I got the author wrong! I was sure it was a newer poem and I just checked her new ones. It could have been someone else and maybe she commented on it and I confused her name with the real author because she made a comment?? I will see if I can find my own comment in an outbox but probably it scrolled off by now!!!

  1. Date: 6/9/2014 2:21:00 PM
    Sweet delightful poetry Linda, a joy to read this Monday evening, James....

  1. Date: 5/6/2014 2:12:00 PM
    Both writes are beautiful Linda. One advantage of short poems is that I can read them over and over again...enjoy them and squeeze every drop out of them. // paul

  1. Date: 4/26/2014 1:25:00 PM
    mail

  1. Date: 3/23/2014 11:29:00 AM
    PD. just revisiting these. I do love sunny poems.

  1. Date: 3/21/2014 1:08:00 PM
    PD, I forgot how to have multiple contests open at the same time. Please explain to me how to do so. It has something to do with finalizing, but not locking the contest?

  1. Date: 3/17/2014 11:34:00 PM
    Linda, your word choices and description are both very unique. Those two factors make your work interesting to read.

  1. Date: 12/29/2013 3:29:00 PM
    Hi Linda, I don't know the form, to be honest I don't know much forms. I can always say what I personally like and this I like. I know, I always say it, your writes are always interesting. Your visions are always painted onto your canvas in such vivid colours. One can easily imagine what you see for you put the whole vision before us. Keep that pen of yours filled with such vivid life and ever paint your canvas with the glory of life. Have a good day. Catch you later. Yours always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Beautiful , and I just imagined all of it , and felt how wonderful and peaceful it would be ! Thanks for your inspiring comments on my poems ! Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us ! Love <3 , Saanvi .....: ))

  1. Date: 11/4/2013 9:28:00 AM
    Good evening my dearest sis! Are you @ work now? Thank u so much for your lovely messages in my poem "Seventh" . So sorry if I just replied now. Was @ school & I arrived late this evening. Thanks for appreciating my new avatar/pix;)) taken @Jordan. By the way, our time is still the same here. Now is 10.30 pm . It's a morning there, right? Good morning & big hugs! I also came & peeked at my latest contest w/c hopefully to be judged this wkend. Goodnyt now! Thanks 4 evrything! Tcare! lovem4evrLeo

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 1:44:00 PM
    Read this again...BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL, PD! :) BTW...honey, please go back to my poem and read my responses to your comments....LOVE ME! :) Hugs!

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 7:26:00 AM
    You do very well at these. and "aquarium sky" that's awesome. Bravo!

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 4:14:00 PM
    a very beautiful piece of writing I wrote one myself next year four back to back red moon check it out with two eclipses in the sky I called it coming signs its very interesting I happened to find it by sheer luck thought I would write something about it before the actual event a piece of history

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 3:41:00 AM
    WoW Linda ..............I wish I was a writer like you !! Stunning and beautiful work !! .........xoxo~Saanvi :)))

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:24:00 AM
    "We sit embracing sweet time" --I LOVE this line.

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 1:17:00 PM
    Congrats-- Very beautifully expressed. Brilliant attempt.

  1. Date: 8/8/2013 3:01:00 AM
    Excellent love this one, great writer love the line sunbathe aquarium sky, beautifully worded, have a blessed day, hugs sueellen

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 3:20:00 PM
    Hi, PD. I bet this won in the contest so I am here to say a big congrats. I see someone congratulated you. Awesome!

  1. Date: 8/3/2013 6:56:00 PM
    Hi, my evrdearest sis! Sending you my big sweet hugs, smiles w/kisses! It's nice waking up earlier this Sun. a.m. reading once again 1 of the phenomenal writes of my loveliest & #1 fav. & greatest poet. So love the glow of the sun which lit your lovely moments.. embracing it tight. I'm sorry I’ve missed to see the winners list ahead of time. Nevertheless, I'm sending my WARMEST HEARTY b-lated CONGRATS on your super win! Thank you so much for your reply & lovely comments on my poem, the chance to join the next contest as well ;) It’s esp. a great relief to hear from you. Hoping you’ll get better soon my dearest sis. Keep sending you all my loving thoughts, prayers & lovely hugs ok. I'm always w/ u. Yes, I wish you'll be w/ me one time in my vac., how about visiting me here & my turn next time there?:)). Take care always! Have a blessed wkend to you & ur family. Lovem4evr,Leo

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