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Interplanetary Travel

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Interplanetary Travel

I hope to view it all today,
Each planet’s just a whoosh away;
Revving engines, whams and bams,
Spaceships stuck in traffic jams;
Writing postcards seems so strange,
Waiting for the lights to change;
I hope to view it all today,
Each planet’s just a whoosh away…

Jack Horne for Nette’s Stardust in an Octelle contest, 5th July

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Enjoyed your planetary whoosh. I'm looking at one that goes whish, a very fast, late model. Love, daver

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 3:41:00 PM
    Like the way this flows Jack, I guess this is one way things could go, I wonder though..I suppose there could be a surprise transport mode even..' hope you are well Joe..'

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:05:00 PM
    Might I recommend having a speed-of-light conversion kit installed in your spaceship, Jack?...Then you can visit the stars too...Great imagination in this gem!...Miss your visits to my poems! - Tim

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:26:00 AM
    Stunning piece Jack, I am sure Nette will love it too ;) the flow is just awesome ;) ps: you surprised me, you remebered lfde ;) hope your weekend is a good one! Lfde

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 8:38:00 PM
    Beautiful imagination takes us on this journey with you, my friend! Always a delightful read, Jack! It's another winning poem! x Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Wouldn't it be great if we lived to see it?? GOOD one, Jack. you are jack the clever.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 7:50:00 PM
    Wow, you have successfully written a masterful write here my friend! I am vastly impressed with the ease at which you made this poem flow effortlessly! I loved reading this awesome poem this evening! What a charming piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 6:41:00 PM
    A nice creative piece and wouldn't it be wonderful to just swoosh away to another planet. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Reads like a winner ..Creative wild imagination on the loose...Thanks for the all the visits..Your presence at my work is uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Smooth, Jack... good luck in the contest! Terry

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:16:00 PM