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Star Dust In Your Eyes

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Star Dust In Your Eyes

star shattered shards like broken glass
falling outward as time and mass
floaters in the eye of night
mining poetry infinite
retinal dancers, prancers,
mute slivers without answers
star shattered shards like broken glass
falling outward as time and mass


Debbie Guzzi
Contest: STARDUST IN AN OCTELLE 
Date: 7/5/13

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:20:00 PM
    :-) I love your star dust winning poem. Congratulations! Luv* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 4:31:00 PM
    a wonderful entry in her contest, Debs. Congrats to you and thanks so much for my win with free verse. Always amazes me when I can do a free verse. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Congratssssss..Sara

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 3:29:00 PM
    I'm loving these references......the floaters in the eye of the night......so brilliant!......

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 5:45:00 AM
    I love the part about the shattered broken glass your poetry is a blessing to man congrats on your win Debbie, love xxx

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    Date: 7/16/2013 5:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oops. I meant to say many not man, you are a blessing to woman too xxx
  1. Date: 7/16/2013 4:20:00 AM
    Congrats. I am happy that you received Glory. Well done wit this piece which puts me in mind of the art by Slavador Dali. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/16/2013 3:42:00 AM
    you took this to a semi-surrealistic flight, really enjoyed the ' retinal dancers', debbie.. congrats and hope you find time to check my blog!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:11:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 7:05:00 PM
    hi Debbie congrats great poem Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 8:11:00 AM
    This is why i always love to visit your poems.There's always some verses which are creatively penned.Im going to look into that article re faries..Did you say celtic?I went to Wales this May..and last year..Maybe the next time i go i 'd be third time lucky and meet the enchanting creature beneath a mushroom who knows..Happy Sunday ma xxz

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Excellently done!!Enjoyed reading it.

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 10:07:00 AM
    Terrific read!!!! ....Contest or no. .... Jake

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:09:00 PM
    Excellent sketch in most powerful and lucid words in describing the glass braking game of stars which falls as dust. My good wishes for your contest entry and thank you for your kind comments on my Yoga series Poem -Meditation. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra..D Guzzi

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 6:53:00 PM
    Check out the alliteration and internal rhyme too y'all!...Oh yeah!...Hands down winner, no one else need apply...

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:13:00 AM
    I don't be on here much but I do look forward to reading your well crafted poems.Excellent!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 6:19:00 AM
    Very descriptive work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Sara

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 5:08:00 AM
    What a brilliant and thought provoking piece! Best wishes Deb. AO

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Deb, it is profound as well as attractive as only you can do it!! Jag

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:02:00 PM
    You write the artist's way my dear woman, hope your well and enjoying your writing successes, love to you always xxx

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:33:00 PM
    awesome write, Debs. Congrats on your wins : ) Thanks for posting your very useful blogs - especially enjoyed the one on writing in rhyming verse