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A crumb of cheese

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A crumb of cheese

I am a mouse
From my house
I can spy......
A huge piece of cheese
Well its huge to me

I am a cat
From my mat
I can spy.....
A crumb of cheese
Wheres that mouse, I cannot see

I am that mouse
Waiting patiently
For that cat .....
To take a nap
So the cheese i can trap

I am that cat
Going to nap
Go ahead mouse ....
Go take the cheese
Eat in your house

Cos I am a tooo lazy cat and much toooo fat that loves to nap.
Cheese is yuck and so are mice, so neither entice.

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  1. Date: 7/13/2013 6:51:00 PM

    hehehehe....I love this poem...its cheeky...full of tease and I was wondering if the Cat was going to 'Pretend' to take the nap to eat the mouse, eating the cheese.......lol love the twist - great poem....Shaz

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 8:26:00 PM

    Taking cheese home from WisDells for souvenirs...not for mice directly however. Enjoyed your crumbly cheese piece. Our dog has taken over the garbage can cabinet and the mice stay away because the garbage now rests atop the counter. When we leave, Simon Dog marches over to the cabinet where we formerly kept the garbage can and inches the door open just enough to slip through and then the door closes behind him. PS thanks too for the win in your recent dog and boy contest.

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/8/2013 2:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Lovely dog, lovely cheese too, enjoy ...Seren
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 7:12:00 PM

    That is absolutely the best crumby cheesy poem I have ever read! Not only made me smile but that may be a bed time story for a little one I know!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/8/2013 2:17:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hope that little boy will love it....Seren
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:45:00 AM

    hahaha, Russell is SO wrong what he says here. I have had many cats and I know for a fact that two of them, when given the opportunity to seize a mouse, they did NOT want that mouse. One cat playfully pounced on it a bit and then got bored. FUN poem (oh , he later admits that a lazy house cat would walk away. I think we have bred the instinct to kill mice out of those house cats.)

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/8/2013 2:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes we feed our animals too well they don't need to hunt to survive....Seren
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:57:00 AM

    I've never known a cat to pass up the opportunity to catch a mouse...and eat it, except maybe the big fat ones, as you've said, ha ha! We have cats catch and leave mice on our doorstop all the time, a gift for us feeding them scraps of food we leave after our meals! House cats still even have the instinct to chase the mouse, but I can see them get too lazy, and big, to want to chase them anymore! I really loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!

    Roberts Avatar Seren Roberts Date: 7/5/2013 6:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Glad you enjoyed it ...Seren