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Red sun

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Below is the poem entitled Red sun which was written by poet Elly Wouterse. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Red sun

at sea sides' red-light district
the heat of the day fuses
with  invisible darkness' 
no point of return

categorie - nature 
For Francine Roberts'Old or New in Five or less Free Poetry 
4/7/2013

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  1. Date: 7/20/2013 9:58:00 AM

    Ellie, congrats on your fantastic win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 7:20:00 PM

    Hi Ellie, a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 8:40:00 AM

    Ellie, enjoyed... congrats! ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 7/19/2013 1:10:00 AM

    this is so awesome that you won in the contest. I recall how much I liked this one. Congratulations.

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse Date: 7/19/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :+)
  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:05:00 PM

    congrats Ellie on your 2nd place win in the "nature" portion of the contest

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse Date: 7/19/2013 1:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :+)
  1. Date: 7/12/2013 9:27:00 AM

    Ellie, the symbolism of this is outstanding. did you say the last line for effect? Normally it's point of no return but also the meaning changes a bit by saying it the different way. Really liked this!!