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DEAR ADAM :I will submit

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DEAR ADAM :I will submit

And He put you to sleep,
Cut you open,
Took one of your ribs,
And came up with me.
Thus, I am from you,
Part of you,
A derived being,
And so to you I shall 
Bone of your bones and,
Flesh of your flesh,
You had to be for me to 
You breathed first before 
I woke
And so rightfully you are 
pioneer of me,
The ultimate, the alpha.
Dear Adam,
To you I will submit,
Your authority I will 
And even though I 
struggle for
At times even dare put 
you under
At the back of my mind I 
know I
am wrong,
So I apologise, and am 
back to where I belong.
He made me your helper 
and not
He made me from you 
and not
from Him though He had 
So automatically, you have
You are the head,
I am your neck,
I support you as you 
Help you turn this way 
and that
To get a better view of 
things and
at times bend to help you 
I will offer my opinions 
But let you make alu the
I will every night whisper 
name in my prayer,
Asking God to give you His
wisdom and strength,
To lead us everyday,
And I will forever follow 
after you,
After all I am the shadow 
of you.
I will submit,
I will obey,
I will humble myself to 
Therefore letting God's 
smoothly flow through.

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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 4:17:00 AM
    Another awesome write. Not many thing the way you do, my dear...but yes, it is Biblical...great write.

    Damah Avatar Wataka Damah
    Date: 7/4/2013 5:38:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you so much, i almost thought i had written something wrong. Thank you so so much