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Meltdown

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Meltdown

Meltdown Put chocolate in your pocket on a warm summer day, Then gracefully try to unwrap it and you’ll find there is no way!

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  1. Date: 10/14/2013 11:35:00 PM

    So true and Universal! Yes, it is something that all remember happening during the Summer. Hi, John! G.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 8:19:00 AM

    Ha! Ain't that the truth, cute John

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 9/1/2013 10:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yeah, wet kisses take on a whole new meaning here.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 8:43:00 PM

    Ohh....a double melt down, very cool! I have this imagine of my sister having a melt down trying to unwrap her melted chocolate...LOL. Hugs

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/10/2013 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    aaaaahh, thanks Cecilia, but I did not make the cut with this one...Oh well... disappointment can morph into creativity.... This one will live to melt another day.... Hugs back atcha.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 12:15:00 PM

    Hi John yeah brill but will give it a try just love that choclate, all the best Poetowen

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/8/2013 3:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Owen. I appreciate your visit and comment... Jake
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Loved this one from you my friend.Clever I agree.Sending greetings your way buddy.

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/7/2013 8:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the kudos. You are welcome to visit at any time....Jake
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:04:00 PM

    with just simple two lines of a simple task express a deep meaning. Thank you for sharing your experience

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/7/2013 7:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for your kind comment.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:17:00 PM

    hey john, just coming back to say hello. And I got your message down here!!

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/6/2013 4:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's always great to be greeted by an angel... Hello right backatcha.... Have a great weekend.... You've already made mine.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 9:35:00 PM

    That was so good Jake, such a simple two lines, but so effective, thanks for sharing, my frie3nd...Peter

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/6/2013 3:22:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi, Peter, I'm happy to see you this morning... I'll be visiting later.... Thanks for the comments.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 5:06:00 PM

    Bittersweet, I'm a choc-a-holic. Lol, Warm Smiles, Connie

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/5/2013 5:56:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I thank you, dearie. your amusement is reward enough for me.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:49:00 AM

    this occurs all the time... even with m& m's which are supposes to melt in mouthh, not in your hands... oh , your words melt wonders, john!..:) huggs

    onclaud Avatar nette onclaud Date: 7/7/2013 11:03:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    oops, ' supposed'... thanks, john...:)
    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/5/2013 11:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Nette, dear friend, I am always thrilled to see your sweet avatar bringing such encouraging comments. You are a real peach..... Love ya dearly.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Hi john, What a meltdown,, I love it:0) goodluck!!...cheriex

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 7:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Cherie. It's great to hear from you... Your comments are appreciated.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 5:34:00 PM

    john, I hope you won't mind but I am going to try to do an M and M poem based on this meltdown theme. Hoping it will turn out as good as YOUR chocolate poem and I hope you won't mind me borrowing your idea of candy/ this little rhyming couplet is just SO good.

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 5:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    When any writer inspires the master, of course It's OK for the master to proceed...... As long as you give me the prize money.... Hugs, Darlin'... Get after it!...Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 3:20:00 PM

    I really hate when that happens! Good one, John. Thank you for your encouraging comments on my poems. Love, Kim

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Kim, I thank you for your visits and encouraging comments.... Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:48:00 PM

    Jake, ha ha .... love the artful humor. Been there, done that :)

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 2:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Karen. Your laughter brings joy to my heart. Love ya ... Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:43:00 PM

    You made me laugh, John. Very funny :) Have a Happy Fourth!

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 12:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear. It's reward enough to know I brought a little humor to you... Love ya ..... Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:06:00 AM

    hahaha, I LOVE how you chose to do this one. Wish I had thought up something clever like this.

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 12:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the kudos... I always treasure anything that makes you smile.....Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:38:00 AM

    Ha ha, very true my friend. Stick it in the freezer and try again in a few hours.

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 8:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    You're a little late with your suggestion there, Richard. It's reached the point of ...."Who's gonna clean up this mess?".... Thanks for all your reads and comments... I truly appreciate them..... Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:24:00 AM

    I love this one!! Such a creative and clever take on this contest :)

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 8:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, dear friend. My work gains respect with your approving comments....Jake
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 3:43:00 AM

    Been there :) Your couplet is clever as the title implies a psychological meltdown-- but I guess this chocolate couplet could cause one :)

    Posey Avatar John Posey Date: 7/4/2013 3:55:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops, did I step outside the box? That's really the first thing that came to mind. Thanks for visiting, Love ya... Jake