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The Pain of Your Love

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The Pain of Your Love

The pain of your love, pricks me to the bone
Like a pissed off praying mantis, I plead with tentacles
The pedigree of your love, powers me to a craze
Pumps my heart to a refill, primes my soul for a play

Painstakingly I peel back, promises in sync
Perilous is my denial, for you poisoned me with love
Where my past dwells, and the present relishes
A bowl of wet rose petals, a morning petit four

The palms of your hands, with a petal soft pat
Your name puts me in a party spirit, oh poetic darkly
Having your love down pat, a huge payload there is
Would you pay me back, for I am a parrot not

You ply in my veins, you keep my password
Your prowl a peachy keen, peek-a-boo it poses
I placate you with praise, I pledge my loyalty to you
Oh poetic darkly, I pledge my soul for your love


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  1. Date: 8/17/2014 2:41:00 AM
    Nicely done Hassan... Belated Congrats! on your win... Verlena

  1. Date: 8/15/2013 9:40:00 AM
    Thank you Drakes for the Honourable Mention in your contest. Honestly I am humbled by the praise from fellow soup members. Thank you all.

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 5:12:00 AM
    A sensational poem. I love grandiloquent eloquent wording in poetry so i was impresd by dis.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Hassan; Congratulations with your win in Drake's Confessional contest. take care- LINDA

    Haji Avatar Hassan Haji
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Linda.
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:30:00 PM
    A powerhouse of emotion Hassan, congrats on your win xxx

    Haji Avatar Hassan Haji
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you mystic
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 6:20:00 PM
    Spectacular piece, glad to see it was chosen so that I am introduced to your work.

    Haji Avatar Hassan Haji
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Richard, you are most welcome
  1. Date: 7/25/2013 4:02:00 PM
    congrats on win Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:09:00 PM
    Hassan, good going in the -The Confessional- contest. CONGRATULATIONS:-) Have yourself a great day. >SKAT<

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 7:55:00 AM
    Hassan, congrats on getting an Honorable mention on my "Confessional" contest! I have to tell you that your verbiage & word flow here were very potent and full of heart. "You ply in my veins, you keep my password", damn! Great work!

    Haji Avatar Hassan Haji
    Date: 7/27/2013 7:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks,Drake