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Haiku 59

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Haiku 59

	
	
	Haiku 59
	
	black lake water
	shy yellow lotus buds
	next week’s flowers
	
	
	black lake water
	yellow flowers’ reflections
	bumblebees hover

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  1. Date: 7/12/2013 10:37:00 PM
    enjoying this one again... what can i say... i love nature, and the way life will always hover over her... buzzing and loving it... Linda

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:34:00 PM
    lovely, art....PD

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/7/2013 6:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It was a beautiful, early morning scene. Thanks for the comment... Jack
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 6:07:00 PM
    Good ones, JAck. I love how we can imagine the buds as next week's flowers.

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/4/2013 6:14:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    It was really a beautiful scene. However, I couldn't hang around to see them open. Sad...
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:24:00 AM
    love the haiku Jack..........SKAT

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/4/2013 4:45:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:50:00 AM
    Oh, I love this one!!! The parallels between both haiku are wonderful, Jack. And the imagery is breathtaking. A fave for me :)

    Jordan Avatar Jack Jordan
    Date: 7/3/2013 8:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you, Heather. That's quite an honor, coming from you... Jack