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DREAMING

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Below is the poem entitled DREAMING which was written by poet olive eloisa guillermo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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DREAMING

Peek into my heart..
you'll see a sac..
Sac containing you in it..
hidden true not myth..

We are so brave..
Basking in affection we crave..
Time & effort we save..
treating each other not a slave..

I saw your gazing..
Slowly searching, seeking..
Nonchalantly questioning..
Probing realms of innocence..

I held my hand..
Asking you to wand..
Hand clasps we walk..
Dreamily never in shock...

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  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:29:00 AM

    "tremendously awesome!!! SKAT"

    guillermo Avatar olive eloisa guillermo Date: 7/5/2013 8:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thanks much :) your poems are same too..
  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:22:00 PM

    A very endearing & touching piece. Open, deep, & from the heart. Excellent!

    guillermo Avatar olive eloisa guillermo Date: 7/5/2013 8:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) i can only reply with my smile.. true, its from the heart