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Hey Mister

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Hey Mister

You said you loved me and I believed 
\Oh, how you deceived 
\Hey Mister you promised to be good to me
\And now you leave?
\You said I was a lady
\Sweet and gentle
\You said that I was smart and limber
\Hey Mister 
\You eat my food I cooked for you
\You tasted the fruit 
\And said it was tight
\So, why, why wasn't I worth the fight?
\Hey Mister
\What went wrong?
\What happened to our favorite song?
\Color faded to gray the day you went away.

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  1. Date: 8/17/2013 10:42:00 PM
    Hi Kellie, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/17/2013 9:46:00 PM
    Kellie, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA ...

  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:52:00 PM
    Kellie, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT