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Day One

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Day One

Day one I showed up

ready to start working at

Der Wienerschnitzel.

My first day was my last day.

The trainer was a *wiener!


*slang for a jerk
(True story from my youth
for Linda's Day One Poetry Contest)

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  1. Date: 8/27/2013 3:23:00 PM

    ha ha nice one short and sweet

  1. Date: 7/31/2013 5:45:00 PM

    Cute one so they were real weiners. ha ha.love phyl

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 6:25:00 PM

    You lasted the whole day eh, I'm impressed lol. I'm sure you can handle jerks better now ha ha. Take care, Richard. Oh nearly forgot, congratulations

  1. Date: 7/8/2013 2:33:00 AM

    HA... LIKE THIS ONE VERY VERY MUCH!! Enjoy your schnitzel!

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 7:32:00 AM

    Congratulations Andrea.....this is a really cute poem...made me smile again...

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:15:00 PM

    good story from your youth

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:15:00 AM

    Oh well some days just go like that Andrea..have had a chuckle while I visited though..'

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 6:08:00 AM

    Smiling again reading this one.

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:37:00 PM

    thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:46:00 PM

    LOL...I like this! :D

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 9:33:00 PM

    ha ha,,, not what I was looking for in my contest... sorry i spotted this one, and had to comment.. it was funny... thank you Andrea,,,, love...Linda

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 8:42:00 PM

    The deed is done...Thanks for the advice!

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:13:00 PM

    lol, love it : )

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 3:56:00 PM

    sure love this, different from you Andrea, but nothing surprises me anymore, regarding your wonderful talent!, not around much lately, but glad to call, i will again trust me....

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 6:43:00 AM

    hehehe, felt like saying poor "wiener" Andrea, just kidding.. thanks for the laughs with this one :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 8:40:00 PM

    Mail

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 7:36:00 PM

    Andrea - Yes, as far as I know all of the lines in the 'Twisted Thoughts' AND the 'Commercial Slam' series are my own creation...Of course, I would NEVER knowing plagerize!...On some I went to the internet just to make sure...Now you've got me wondering, so my plan is to do all of them now and of course, if I find anything, I will delete and issue an apology...I am going to go ahead and delete the food one now, and if I find it's all my own, repost in 3 parts as you suggested

    Ryerson Avatar Tim Ryerson Date: 7/4/2013 8:38:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I may go ahead and delete all of them because it's not really poetry and doesn't belong on a poetry site
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 2:26:00 PM

    Hahahaha.......this is so adorable! I can relate :-).....Love Roobs xxxx

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:35:00 AM

    Haaa!!...Bet he was a real 'hot dog' too!...And the winner is: Andrea!...Come on up Andie and say a few words to your fans! (Wild applause, whistles, etc.) anDIE!-anDIE!-anDIE! Yeyyyyyyy!...'Aw shucks y'all, I'm speechless...First of all, I'd like to thank by good friend, Tim Ryerson...Come on up, Tim!...

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:46:00 AM

    Glad that your first work experience did not stop you from finding a job that suited you..Enjoyed reading this morning..Never heard that word used in that way..Live and learn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are valuable to me..Briton Riviere did some fantastic paintings..I enjoyed looking at them everyone.Sara

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 4:37:00 PM

    I had a couple of one day jobs, too. I think you can find my older poems by going to Matthew Anish poetry. Happy Fourth to you and yours! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 1:14:00 PM

    Andrea; This is good. I too had a one day job when I was young. I was not tall enough. I had to be on my toes all day, so I didn't go back. Good luck in the contest..... Lucilla

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 10:55:00 AM

    Andrea great humor in this Tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:54:00 AM

    This is a fascinating tanka my dearest friend Andrea! A perfect idea & entry for the contest. i love it and so enjoyed reading it tonight;)). In fact, I also wrote one but I was late to enter it. I'll post it next time ;)) Thank you so much for sharing & your very inspiring & encouraging comments on my latest poem. Good luck and best wishes always! love much and biggest sweetest hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 8:27:00 AM

    Aww this is so cute!

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 7:23:00 AM

    An adorably funny tanka - and based on a true story, no less! I love the way your mind works, lady! Thank you so much for your encouraging comments. You're right about the "stretched" couplets in my pawn shop poem haha. Had to get creative with the line length in that one! :)

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 5:08:00 AM

    Good one Andrea, you made us all think of that first job. Winner for sure.Anne

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 9:51:00 PM

    Haha....thank you Andrea....:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) needed this chuckle bad

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 5:02:00 PM

    Day two, he or she is through. Losing a find like you. :)

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 1:40:00 PM

    Very good use of the form to tell your story Andrea.Best wishes for the contest.

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