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Weather Cheats

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Weather Cheats

Clouds smile as they shine
Whistling with their odd breezes
Sounds like perfect day

Out from the dark place
Mirroring the other side
Sky ready to cry

Washed up by the rain
Perfect day gone with the wind
Weather cheats on me

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  1. Date: 7/11/2013 7:06:00 AM

    hey Yanny, I am liking these, especially the weather cheating us :-)

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 7/11/2013 8:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    So the weather also cheats on you? :p wow, hopefully next time it will not do the same thing again on you :D hehehe, glad to have a comment by you Mike :D wishing you a great day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:51:00 AM

    A visit and a poem I havn't read, it is a good day. Take care hugs Rick. I enjoyed reading this piece.

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 7/8/2013 10:37:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Rick I'm happy to have your visit too today :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Hi Yanny...beautiful chain haiku... salam kenal :) ~Shirley

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 7/8/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Shirley, Salam Kenal juga :) glad to have a comment by you :) hug, yanny
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 11:31:00 PM

    a wonderful haiku * thank you for sharing. Linda

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 7/8/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Linda, glad to see your visit as well :D hug, yanny
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 8:58:00 PM

    this is a great set. I especially enjoyed weather cheats on me!

    Widjanarko Avatar Yanny Widjanarko Date: 7/2/2013 12:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks Andrea, it's been a tricky day today, I thought it will be sunny :p glad to see you visit today :D hug, yanny