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Below is the poem entitled Day One which was written by poet Tom Hartman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Day One

Day one; a newborn sun
Bar the door on memories
And now let’s have some fun
Our minds sail off choppy seas
Stand tall, stillness finds your knees
And now let’s do as we please

Forest’s floor bristles with fur
Life carpets the thawing ground
It’s just like her; for a color blur
Heat erupts, a chorus of sound
Everything lost has been found
Heavy hearts have lost a pound

The sun’s rays, a new coat of paint
Melts the pain, darkness’s drain
Kicking a new path with no complaint
‘Cause there’s a fresh day to be slain
And as we peek at day two
Another life begins anew

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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:32:00 PM
    Tom, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Tom congratulations on your wonderfully written verse. A well deserve win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 7/14/2013 12:03:00 AM
    Tom, Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 7/7/2013 9:37:00 AM
    This is absolutely a great inspirational poem my dear friend Tom. MY BIG HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED WIN! Thanks for sharing! love & big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:25:00 PM
    This is such a lovely uplifting poem...congratulations on your win

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 4:48:00 PM
    Tom, Superbly written with encouragement and great imagery Love the ending and congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:26:00 PM
    this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:20:00 PM
    TOM, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

    Hartman Avatar Tom Hartman
    Date: 7/6/2013 10:06:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much! I'm glad you could enjoy the poem =p
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:50:00 PM
    Lovely poem. Congratz on your win. :))