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  1. Date: 8/21/2013 1:49:00 PM

    very powerful piece here....the metaphors really bring this poem to life...your talent shines through :)

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 11:38:00 PM

    That was quite brilliant Gail, really enjoyed it Peter

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 12:21:00 PM

    It's quite a chore to get all the tangled vines of life straightened and untangled. Good write as usual Gail.

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 3:59:00 PM

    Beautitufl poem Gail. Deep thoughts of the soul. I enjoyed it. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out my poetry, might find one you like.

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 8:37:00 AM on my side...yes it is. Absolutely strong lines here! Sometimes, we don't need to get as tangled as we allow ourselves to be. Excellent job!

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:04:00 PM

    Lovely writing as always, Gail. We often write of what is on our minds and you do it so well.

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:37:00 PM

    This is a very awesome write, quite the emotional verse my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a magnificent piece, such an outstanding poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 3:20:00 PM

    Reads like winning material to me..Enjoyed reading your contest entry..I hope not an experience that you have felt in life but just about a topic..Sometimes it is hard to keep love's embers ignited..Thanks for the visit to my work..Your presence at my work is always encouraging.Sara