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Your shadow is your beloved wife

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Your shadow is your beloved wife

Your shadow is your beloved wife... When you married your wife you have promised her to take care till you end Marriage is a fulfillment of dreams With these promised dreams she stepped in your house as a beautiful wife She held your hands with her dreams She gave her heart to you with love and faith She walked along with you when you had hard time She gave you everything what ever she had Today you made her dreams shuttered Today you made her heart suffer with pain of love Today you made her walk along with pain and struggle Today you made her eyes dim with salty tears Today Your unfaithfulness made her life miserable Today you live with out her love and shadow Today your heart is refusing to accept her as a wife But one day you will realize her value and her faithful love when you struggle with your pain and the agony that make you handicap. On that day you will realize your wife is your shadow that holds on you. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:16:00 AM
    A very beautiful poem from a very loving husband this is my dear friend, Ravi. Two thumbs up here! Thank you so much for sharing! May God bless you and your family! love lots, Leonora

    Sathasivam Avatar Ravi Sathasivam
    Date: 7/9/2013 4:36:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


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  1. Date: 7/2/2013 2:20:00 PM
    Just amazing Ravi!Enjoyed very much.Thanks for visiting my page.

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  1. Date: 7/2/2013 5:04:00 AM
    ohh, a lovely poem cuddling the lines with such tenderness... you amaze, ravi... beautiful!...:) huggs

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:26:00 PM
    Ravi; This is a wonderful poem. It takes a real man to say these things. I think that faithfulnenn is the key to a happy life. god bless always ...... Lucilla

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:14:00 PM
    I love the concept of your wife being your shadow, and perhaps a true loving husband is her shadow as well...Your love and sincerity shines brightly here, Ravi...Thank you for the inspiration - Tim

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 8:58:00 AM
    what a poetic way to say it. WEll done, Ravi.

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 7:53:00 AM
    very lovely poem of yours friend Ravi...I like it..Have a nice day!!

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 7:08:00 AM
    Oh Ravi, our wives not only a shadow but the light that guides us as well! You have touched the relationship of man and wife here, how it should be in order to last and to succeed! Great work! Wives everywhere will applaud you!

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:08:00 AM
    Ravi very good sentiments and many home truths excellent Shadow x smiles

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