Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
 

Sheffield knife

Giorgio A. V. Avatar Giorgio A. V. - LIFETIME Premium Member Giorgio A. V. - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail Go to Poets Blog Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Sheffield knife which was written by poet Giorgio A. V.. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Giorgio A. V.

Best Giorgio A. V. Poems

+ Fav Poet

Sheffield knife

Sheffield knife

We stood across the ship's black painted brim,
forever weak appeared the beacon's light,
the night imperfect seemed; the stars shone dim,
(moon-flash steel's curb and twinge of Sheffield knife).

The birds' were singing in the mauve of dawn,
notes resolution of communion's chrism,
the images back then, became my dome,
and Hades' kingdom glassy rainbow's prism.

Life ornamental was, fast to dissolve,
advancing wilt, recall of distant stare,
for none was this equation to resolve,
a wine's red spill, and stars' marquee of  prayer.

( I'll stay away from Aden's doleful coast
assuming that earth's blooming fields are mine,
upon the wharf a flash and I became a ghost,
a challenging recall and blade's bold shine -

- I do recall our sweetest Sunday feasts,
the teenage dreams and blue noon skies,
our bicycling along the shoreline's mists,
the nightly gatherings, our talks and smiles.)

© 04-29-2011, G.Vevetopoulos
(Iambic Pentameter)

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
 
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:14:00 AM

    emjoyed the mythical strains, cadence of meter, rhyme,and flow... wonderful plot, enchanted!..:) hugggs

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 4:12:00 PM

    excellent poem full of deep meaning Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 9:38:00 AM

    This is an outstanding poem with outstanding form my dear friend, Giorgio. You're a great poet as well with superb talent. Handsalute here! You really impressed me with this great write. I hope I can try this beautiful form also someday. Thank you so much for sharing & your precious time reading my latest poem with your very inspiring comments. Thanks a lot for sharing your knowledge & skills in poetry/writing. Its highly appreciated. More power *& blessings to you! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 2:29:00 PM

    I really love the way you use your words. Nothing is trivial, nothing taken for granted. Truly excellent and obvious talent.

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 12:35:00 PM

    Hi Giorgio great write my friend really enjoyed reading tonight, all the best Poetowen

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:41:00 PM

    Interesting and very unique work that you have penned in this one..Enjoyed reading this evening..Your review of my work was uplifting..I appreciate the time spent there reading and commenting..Sara