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Two colors

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© G. V. 2/28/2011, All Rights Reserved(Prototype in Greek - © G. V. 2007)
This poem is an unfortunate translation from Greek; I wrote it in Boston while a student. I admit that this particular write, cannot be translated efficiently. The words I used in Greek are very specific and the meanings are directly affected by them. Maybe I'll try again in the future. Thank you.


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Two colors


Two colors are wrapped around my heartbeat,
detained by dawn's brightest star;
I wish to keep a faithful record of replies,
for wherever you'll return to my feast of time.

Thin raindrops of a mistle fall;
(this silent fog resembles Autumn);
small phrases I sent to infinity -
to that infinity I searched for you - Angels' rain,
- Angels of your dreamy form.

I saw you elevating there
an absolute, ideal outline of forms
in iridescent colors of the winds
of those winds that made you a small
- a small recurrence of my visions to infinity.

Two colors are wrapped around my heartbeat,
which in solitude records a windy day,
silences of the Angels surround my Fall
this very Fall you escaped to infinity.

© G. V.  2/28/2011

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  1. Date: 3/10/2014 2:01:00 PM
    Giorgio What an intriguing and interesting write. I could feel the hope in your heart this person comes back to you. Thanks for the great comment on my Preparing For Baby poem.

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:24:00 AM
    this is just beautiful, Giorgio!

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 10:00:00 AM
    This is another stunning write of yours my dear friend, Giorgio. I extremely love it! An excellent write indeed! Thank you so much for sharing! love and big hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:52:00 PM
    Interesting lines penned..Left me wondering who escaped into infinity?..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 2:21:00 PM
    The iridescent colors of the winds...... wow..........I'm taken my the breathlessness of this beautiful poem...so lovely, such a love as this! So enjoyable this poem!

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    Date: 7/17/2013 3:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.