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Eve's Advocate

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Eve's Advocate

With patience, in a concealed place,
in long grass, or a packing case
as unwary prey comes apace
never his footsteps to retrace

With cold eye, beady, dead in space,
Uncoiling with hypnotic grace,
Slow motion skin - an awful lace,
 To silent earth, no sudden trace. 




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  1. Date: 10/18/2013 8:34:00 AM
    :)

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 12:00:00 PM
    It is about the snake! Very smart and accurate descriptive monorhyme! Thank you for it! :)

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 8:19:00 AM
    Good one on that snake in the grass!! The expression fits so well for people who act that well as well! suz, about Tom Cruise, I read some things about his marriage and learned that he was very sweet to his Catie. But he let his religious leaders dominate their lives. I guess we can't know for sure but maybe people are giving him a worse rap than he deserves!

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:40:00 AM
    For what he did to humanity - his flattened head I yearn to see..... Good morning... You are writing well ..... and I'm loving it..... Jake

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 5:20:00 AM
    Great work describing that serpent..He is still a sly old fox...Thanks for the visit..Sara