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Silly Me

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Below is the poem entitled Silly Me which was written by poet David William Breidenthal. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Silly Me

My love towards you was so extremely surreal
But I wasn't sure if it was actually real?

 If it was, then that'd be appealing...

Was it real
Or was it a plastic surgery of reality?
Was it surreal
Or was it a plastic affair? 

Tell me if it was a infatuation 
If it was, silly me...silly me...
I still have a mind of a child

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  1. Date: 6/30/2013 7:39:00 PM
    ha ha nothing wrong in having a mind of a child. David,. Thank you for sharing <3 ~SKAT~ <3

    Breidenthal Avatar David William Breidenthal
    Date: 6/30/2013 8:01:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I didn't say there was anything wrong with it, but thanks anyway for the encouragement and your sweet, awesome comment; have yourself a splendid summer and stay cool, girl.