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Invisible

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Invisible

I wonder what it would be like
to be invisible, when you chose
just think of all the zany crazy things
that you could get up to, if you were

Like going and sitting on the throne
the one in Buckingham Palace 
not the one in the closet
pretending you were queen 

Nah!! That is not for me
too like being a goldfish
maybe sit in at state meeting
oh no, what a bore that would be

I know take part in a rock concern
now that would be oh so cool
standing there with fans galore
going crazy as the music takes hold 

Sneaking into a brothel to watch
and learn some new moves
Nah!! way too tacky by half
do you know what? I ask

Maybe it would be no fun
unless you were a spy
then most useful it would be
but for me I will stay visible 

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  1. Date: 7/1/2013 12:36:00 PM
    You made me smile! ( I'll become the goldfish for a while.) Thank you for the beautiful write. ")

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/1/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Giorgio that's good lol ty goldfish? hmm I would have to cover you over now and then lol Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:17:00 AM
    A solid statement presented here. It's good to step into another's shoes, solely for the sake of opening your mind and, for nothing else, reminding yourself how good you have it. The grass is not always greener...

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/1/2013 2:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Drake indeed dear friend may look it but seldom is ty for dropping in coffee's always strong and hot Shadow x smiles