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A BLACK BEE ON A RED ROSE

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A BLACK BEE ON A RED ROSE

                                              A black bee on a red rose
                                            sucking honey with its pose
                                             flapping wings rest a while
                                              sticking sting having smile
                                              Yellow pollen tastes much
                                                 flies to next give buzz
                                               night's food needs to pile
                                                   living days life style







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  1. Date: 7/5/2013 4:25:00 PM
    Little bee is flapping well, watch him sting, pain him tell:) Momma here, father gone, he likes his tea black n strong, she almost 90 see, ole Johnson waits 4 she.... anon...

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 7/5/2013 7:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Yes, I caught my friend. Thanks for your comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:14:00 PM
    A black bee on a red rose. It is very beautiful Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 6/30/2013 9:29:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A lot of thanks for your visit and for beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:13:00 PM
    A very beautiful & delightful poem which I've enjoyed to read this morning my dear friend bl. I love the feeling here making my morning very refreshing. Thank you so for sharing & your nice comment on my poem. Have a blessed weekend! love & hugs, Leonora

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 6/30/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    A lot of thanks for stopping by on my write. Loved always, bl
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:18:00 PM
    Nice write. Just take the apostrophe out of "it's". No genitive case (not "it is" or "it has") exists there.

    devnath Avatar BL devnath
    Date: 6/30/2013 9:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Many thanks my friend for showing my silly mistake. I have rectified now. Again thanks for you visit to my page and for your comment, Loved always, bl