Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership
Quote of the Day

Quote Left"A contented mind is the greatest blessing a man can enjoy in this world."Quote Right

by Joseph Addison

  |  Comment

See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places

Day One

Rebel Poet Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Day One which was written by poet Rebel Poet. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Rebel Poet

Best Rebel Poet Poems

+ Fav Poet

Day One

Day one,
My eyes met her smile,
As she welcomed me with class and her unique style, 
So I decided to talk to her for a while,
Realizing her vibe might was true
To stimulate her mental view
Is what I wanted to do!

I became the night glow,
And so I let her know, 
That I'm not like those
Average foes,
Who just want to take her treasure,
Although to me that would be
The highest of pleasures! 
The utmost measure!
Is Love you see,
Which is the purity
Of two souls in unity,
Connected with the Almighty.

Not wanting to rush this,
Because in the past I have lost interest
I am wiling to sacrifice and invest,
Everything to bring her happiness
If she deserves the best
Why would I settle for nothing less?

Instead of many days we are now equivalent to one,
No more of her radiation in my Sun!
So no need for me to go on,
With these words I recited like a song
To this Queen that played me at the end like a pawn,
Not knowing I was a King all along
Since day One!






Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 10/15/2013 11:44:00 AM

    So well done and powerful!

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 11/6/2013 5:33:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Richard, the inspiration for this one was deep!
  1. Date: 7/9/2013 12:46:00 PM

    I really love this poem! Heart felt, passionate, and full of emotion- that makes for a good read! Well done my friend. :)

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 7/9/2013 4:15:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Anne, Appreciate the love!
  1. Date: 7/8/2013 6:29:00 PM

    Enjoyed your poetry tonight, awesome write, way to go Hakim! xxx

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 7/8/2013 6:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rose! I am delighted that you enjoyed this one... : )
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:02:00 AM

    This is indeed a great write which I enjoyed reading tonight my dear friend, Hakim! My hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win! Thank you so much for sharing! love & hugs, Leonora

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 7/8/2013 5:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Leonora, Thank you for your sweet words, Very much obliged! Hakim
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:28:00 PM

    Congratulations.. nice job!

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:25:00 PM

    this is one cool poem, CONGRATS, love Skat

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 7/8/2013 5:22:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Hey Skat, Thanks for the love!
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:22:00 PM

    Hello Hakim, missing your work...glad to see you on my contest winning list..., thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 7/6/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Linda!
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:51:00 PM

    Nicely written. Love it. Congratz on your win.. :)

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 7/6/2013 7:59:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks
  1. Date: 7/4/2013 11:31:00 AM

    Magnificent!!!...hakim your style is so unique, really enjoyed reading from day one:)

    Poet Avatar Rebel Poet
    Date: 7/4/2013 1:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Cherie!