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meltdown

Too much stress
Endless dead-end jobs
Screaming ankle -biters
That want more then I can give
A tormented husband who needs to relax
How much more Lord?
I think I'm having a
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  1. Date: 6/29/2013 5:12:00 AM

    This in between simple writing and poetry. It is curious and amusing to play with words. Not naive, anyway. I am trying now to read poems, including mine, in a critical way because much of writing is not poetry. We must exercise recyprocal criticism. I am ready to accept.

    croft Avatar karen croft Date: 6/29/2013 7:09:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for the comment! When I read poems I think that everyone else's are always so much better. I tey to be different and try new forms. Sometimes I get stuck on haiku for a while or free verse .
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:14:00 PM

    Clever! I like. BG

    croft Avatar karen croft Date: 6/29/2013 7:10:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your comment!!