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Day One

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Day One

Day 1 is when you winked at me
Day 2 I saw you grin
Day 3 is when you blew a kiss
Day 4 went out for a spin
Day 5 is when you held my hand
Day 6 gave me a kiss
Day 7 I gave up being coy
Day 8 …well, that was sheer bliss
Day 9 we looked at the stars
Day 10 swam in the sea
Day 11 I cooked you a meal
Day 12 you ravished me
Day 13 we had our first fight 
Day 14 we didn’t speak
Day 15 we kissed and made up
Day 16 you made me weak
Day 17, 18, and 19 
They all started to blur
Day 20 is when you said to me
“Be my forever girl!”

Now we are just counting years
And counting young’uns too
If I had to do it all again
I’d start Day 1 with YOU!

For PD's Day One Contest

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:10:00 AM

    Wow! I love this so much my dear friend, Eileen! MY HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WELL-DESERVED SUPER WIN! love lots and big big hugs, Leonora

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 7/9/2013 3:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Wow...thanks for this sweet post. :) I'm so happy to have read it. Hugs..
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:31:00 PM

    Congratulations sweetie...loved reading it again...have had a grand holiday...hope you are well

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 3:06:00 PM

    Eileen, a most delightful read my dear.....love your romantic and playful side. Big Congrats! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 2:24:00 PM

    nice....skat

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 7/6/2013 2:26:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Thanks, dearie!
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 9:21:00 AM

    Congrats on your win with this wonderful poem. Loved always, bl

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 7/6/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks ever so much, ML. You are always kind and encouraging.
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 6:07:00 AM

    Eileen's a STAR! WHOOPEE..CONGRATULATIONS!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 7/6/2013 9:30:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    WOW! Music to my ears!!!!!!! :) :) :) Love ya, Judy.....
  1. Date: 7/6/2013 1:38:00 AM

    This is fun Congratulations on your many wins. You ar a star, dear one. SuZ

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 7/6/2013 9:31:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oh, Suz....thank you and bless you for saying that. I'm flying high! HUGS!!!
  1. Date: 7/5/2013 11:24:00 PM

    E, thank you for your day one entry and win... congrats!!! :-) From: Linda

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 10:47:00 PM

    Excellent poem!! I enjoyed every word of it. Congratulations on your awesome win, Eileen :)))

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 7/6/2013 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Very sweet of you, Shirley. Glad you could connect with it! :) I love that you LOVE IT!
    Candy Avatar Shirley Candy Date: 7/5/2013 10:49:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    +Fave this one. Love itttttttttttt... :)))
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:12:00 AM

    perfect! love it!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 7:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, Ilene. You are too kind! I'm not complaining...I'm happy! You've always been a great support to me...HUGS!
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 12:46:00 AM

    Hi Eileen, see my response to your comment. Signing off, almost midnight.

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 7:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I did, Richard. I responded. Good morning to you. Hope you have a good day.
    Lamoureux Avatar Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/29/2013 12:47:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Have a great day. Hugs Rick
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 10:59:00 PM

    good luck in contest

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks! :) I had fun writing this...It's a silly little thing, so we will see how it goes!
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 10:38:00 PM

    oh wow! now that's what I call a day one poem........ start from the first time, you recall that one very moment....... Eileen, I love the poem. and you counting the young one's wow. to the ending. a perfect 10 poem. you went all sweet at the end. I am in awe'ssssssss ~SKAT~

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 1:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    SKAT....thank you, my dear. I'm touched by this post of yours! A PERFECT 10, you say? Let's see how we do on the contest. Hugs!
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 8:23:00 PM

    It's to bad it's fiction, I was cheering by the end of it. You did a fabulous job, a creative take on the contest. Hugs Rick

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 1:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks....wanted to make sure everyone knew that ravished on day 12 just wouldn't happen!!!! He'd have to work more for it than that! :)
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:37:00 PM

    This is purely fictional, friends......

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:23:00 PM

    Very clever write myLittle desert Orchid, hope this does well for you. A whole twelve days eh lol. Take care, Richard

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 1:46:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I hope so too, my dear. YEA....day twelve was a doozy! ;) Had to be an even number.....Hugs!
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:36:00 PM

    Oh.....many more happy years and no tears....good luck sweetie..bet it's a winner

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 1:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks, MD. You have a very strong poem in this contest. It has a deep meaning. This was just a little bit of a fun write with the days! I've learned never to bet on anything! Hugs!
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:14:00 PM

    This is beautiful, I really enjoyed reading this phenomenal write this afternoon! What a tremendous poem my friend! You have painted a glorious piece, one that was easily envisioned by me! Great Work!!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 1:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) Glad you could envision it.....Not day 12, eh? ;) Thanks for visiting and posting, Russell.
  1. Date: 6/28/2013 12:56:00 PM

    SO SWEET! This one brought a huge smile to my face!!

    Ghali Avatar Eileen Ghali Date: 6/29/2013 1:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    And a pretty smile it is cutie pie!