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  1. Date: 5/3/2015 10:30:00 PM
    Craig, Congratulations on your win. Thanks for the support. SKAT

  1. Date: 8/23/2013 10:28:00 PM
    I love it! I love the 2nd to last line! Beautiful!

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 2:50:00 PM
    Great truth written in this winning work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 7/10/2013 6:41:00 PM
    Lot's of meter going on here :) maybe don't start 2 lines with 'like' and go on a bit more? Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 11:22:00 AM
    Great entry Craig, loved it ...Seren

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Craig, now I must tell you.... I was just about to write something for this contest when I ran up against this entry of yours. Now I realize I would be writing for a 2nd place rating at best. This is surely a winner. The sheer love of writing may bring something from my pen... Sincerely, yours is a class entry and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it this afternoon.... Congratulations.... In advance..... Jake

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 12:21:00 PM
    poignant pattern of thought with an almost desperate but beautiful plea... well done, craig and congrats on your summer couplet win!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:57:00 PM
    Craig I enjoyed reading this tonight. You've described tangled vines very well and you've sprinkled in a little moral wisdom too. Best wishes in the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:54:00 PM
    beautiful take love it Craig TFS. Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:08:00 PM
    awesome write, my friend - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:14:00 PM
    craig, this flows like the artist's brush painting the scene of tangled vines and it's stunning how you've compared them to entanglements in our morals. Very finely crafted :)

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:05:00 PM
    smile..your inspiration was who? What? yes Craig if the word THEIR in some ones verse inspires you CAN refer to it for my contest! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 9:14:00 AM
    excellent flow of words.Hope your days are going well.Colleen

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 6:33:00 AM
    Another great write. I think the analogy is so apt. Good luck for the competition.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:40:00 PM
    wow, so beautiful and so profound.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Craig this is beautiful...