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  1. Date: 7/18/2013 1:31:00 AM
    So much emotion here dear Heather- Very sad yet beautiful-Charma

  1. Date: 7/15/2013 3:33:00 PM
    Powerful emotions in this heart moving write. Well written! Hugs

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:52:00 AM
    Very expressive and emotive work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I hope not a actual event in your life but based on another's story..Sara

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 6:55:00 PM
    Heather at first I thought you were describing a man you'd divorced who was watching perhaps the daughter you had raised together. But then I thought, maybe he is marrying another woman. In either case, the message is powerful and I love it.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 2:15:00 PM
    I've been in similar instances a few times. But, you know, everything for a reason. The reason may not always be immediately apparent, but it'll reveal itself soon enough. Still, I know the hurt behind these lines. Excellent expression here, Heather!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 11:45:00 AM
    A beautiful poem. I like the alliteration in this it evokes a special type of rythm.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 10:30:00 AM
    Oh're going to make me well up....folding up in fear....why? Hope this is fiction. Beautifully written. Touced my hear. To my favs sweetie!!!! Hugs.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:19:00 AM
    Johnny Maestro with the Brooklyn Bridge described how painful it is to see someone you love marry somebody else. Your work does a good job as well.