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lonliness

The sun is shining and the birds are singing 
the boys are playing and the girls are dancing
the beautiful day say good morning 
the beautiful night say good night
i think this all gonna be all right
but every thing was going worse
i know this all because of hers 
i thought she'll with me always
but she left me within some days
why this all happens to me
is she happy after leaving me
this is all so blue without you
no one is with me only left are few 
i want you to come back in my life
because without you i would never be fine

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  1. Date: 7/9/2013 3:08:00 AM
    - Hi Apoorva, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 7:55:00 PM
    Awesome, it's beautiful. Maybe check mine out to

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 7:04:00 AM
    thanks to you all its my first poem and trying to improve myself pls keep commenting on my poems thanks :)

    kiran Avatar ravi kiran
    Date: 7/5/2013 2:50:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Seems like we both started poetry because of a loss, mine was 'please brother' I can totally relate myself to your poem. Pain and Passion both are true architects of great poets. Good luck
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:05:00 PM
    Apoorva, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers. Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. Hope you meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop by and say hello. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:02:00 PM
    Hi Apoorva, a sad feeling to be without..... enjoyed dropping by :-) -WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side. Hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your pen is looking for. If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda