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Exodus

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Exodus

I watch another setting sun, losing a loved one,
Yet I know this is commonplace.
It's hard to hear that they've gone,
Though death was their saving grace.

We all knew that this time would come,
Not wishing for the hour nor day.
Though life, like before, it carries on,
After they have passed away.





©2013 Honestly JT

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  1. Date: 8/5/2013 6:39:00 AM
    A stunning piece which really deserved its super win! CONGRATULATIONS my dear friend, PJ! Thank you so much for sharing as well. And since somebody sent me a message, i'm passing it to you, Happy Friendship Day! love/hugs, Leonora

  1. Date: 8/5/2013 5:12:00 AM
    PJ., congrats on your well deserved victory. G.

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 10:09:00 PM
    PJ., , Congratulations, with your winning poem..... goodnight~ Linda

  1. Date: 8/4/2013 5:23:00 PM
    Nice win....SKAT

  1. Date: 7/5/2013 3:40:00 PM
    Losing loved ones are indeed tough, great expression, Poetic Justice. Deep as well. check out some of my poems, might find one you like. Peace.

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 5:26:00 PM
    Poetic Justice, I was moved by the elegance in describing the losses. Very inspirational :)

  1. Date: 7/4/2013 10:59:00 AM
    sad, and deep.......enjoyed............ LOVE* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 12:07:00 PM
    tenderly rendered like a soft melody, PJ... a lovely portrait of love, life, and death... beautiful....:)huggs

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:21:00 PM
    death was their saving grace...what a beautiful line and poem....hope you are at peace.God bless

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:33:00 PM
    OH MY!!!! What an amazing write. To my favs! This is so sad, and yet...so true. We like a flower, here today and gone tomorrow...only to be remembered by those whose lives we have impacted. Great work and if it is true to life, I hope that you are finding the grace and strength to cope.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:31:00 PM
    Deeply said my friend!!! Speaks of pure truth...regards INK-U-SCRIPT

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 10:33:00 PM
    I really like this. It says so much.