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  1. Date: 1/23/2014 2:58:00 PM
    thank you, for this one... at least you know how I feel....Linda

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Yasmin, Nice to see you on Debbie Guzzi, winning list...... Congratulations! Hugs* SKAT

  1. Date: 7/18/2013 2:47:00 PM
    Oh being a woman aye? It really can be awful sometimes, I am so happy you find inspiration in my writing. I only wish I could do more to lift your spirits. Congrad's on your fine work winning! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 5:41:00 PM
    Oh yes indeed Jasmine!... I knew this would be on the winner's list (I would have ranked it much higher) Nonetheless, a straight up, unflinching, truthful, take no prisoners approach to depression...'a parched hiccup, bloodless eyes dry, a hangover of pain'...Perfect - Tim

  1. Date: 7/17/2013 12:40:00 PM
    "Burying my head into pillows, stifling dreams.." Emotional exhaustion is felt more intensely than physical pain or being tired. A great write and congrats on your win, Yas. Love, Su

  1. Date: 7/13/2013 4:58:00 PM
    FANTASTIC, BRAVO, WOW! This is an outstanding poem Yasmin. Powerfully deep emotions conveyed and I love the metaphors. Warm Smiles, Conniie

  1. Date: 7/6/2013 10:10:00 AM
    wow, this is REALLY good stuff, sweet lady. This is not the first really sad poem I have seen in Deb's contest. MIne is a sad one too, when I get to posting it. I think her sad examples she gave us in the blogs really hit home with most of us. Cyndi's is the one whose words are similar to mine. are you using this in Deb's referential contest. You really must!!

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 4:48:00 PM
    Yasmin the Jasmine - I also read the stunner you wrote about depression as one of the poems to write about as inspiration in Deb's contest...I didn't think it was possible but I can see you have improved on that poem...I have battled depression since 2001...In the short time I have known you, I have watched you progress from a good poet writing about nice, pretty little things to this...Hands down winner here - No contest - Tim

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 11:53:00 AM
    no i'm not sick.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:16:00 PM
    Deep poem here Yasmin.Powerful write.Best wishes for the contest.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 12:27:00 PM
    Mareeey!... sometimes, the stress can heighten your artistic side and this write expresses the haze you are experiencing with sensitve, raw images... how are you?.. take care and breathe... priya hugggs you!..:)

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 9:46:00 AM
    aww Yassie...thank the lord we can write and read, sometimes it is our only escape! This is a POWERFULL verse! You need help hon, yoga helps me, and meditation tapes, exercise and sunshine help too as well as helping some one else cause it gets our minds off ourselves! Love you Yassie LIGHT LIGHT

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 9:24:00 AM
    The immensity of this write is truly phenomenal my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! What a powerful piece, another masterful poem by you Yasmin, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:30:00 AM
    deeps in the depths of pure spirits or depression at it's lowest this is a really good write, enjoyed, always, Linda