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Letting Go

"Letting Go!"

Behind that garden rail;
Where worms, squirm and roam,
They dig into every worst part of my day.
I feel them crawling, making my hide their home.
They feast on my will, and my dead walking soul.

Slowly I am fading away into a cloud of nothing.
I find myself reminiscing the moment I meet you.
With scars and guilt,
I can’t let go!

I’m cold and miserable inside.
Different emotions, I no longer hide.  
I can’t seem to heal the deep cut from within.
Echoes are twisting moods that have no meaning.
I sit, with a jar full of tears, holding on tight.
Afraid of letting go!

The hollow walls slay  in every way.
The abyss of a waterfall, resides in my heart
This throbbing starvation, repeats the taste it longs for,
I have no control.
I can’t feed without you by my side.
I won't let go!

by:PD

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  1. Date: 4/18/2014 1:55:00 PM

    There is much pain in your words. There are always going to be crossroads for us to chose and sometimes that path is not an easy choice. Thinking of you from afar Linda :)

  1. Date: 3/7/2014 10:08:00 PM

    ah...i felt this few months ago...haha! Hard letting go. Love this! Thanks, PD for the warm welcome!

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 9:55:00 AM

    An Amazing poem...could feel the sentiments behind it :)

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 12:20:00 PM

    Hi Linda, a most heartfelt write. The hardest thing of all for us to do is to let go. Yet do we not suffer more for holding in all our pain and suffering. You take us deep into the emotions of our inner selfs. Many of us have felt these emotions, some of us have let go, knowing it was the best thing to do for all concerned. It still isn't easy. As always, your piece is interesting and very emotional. Feelings go out to you. Have a good day. Later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

  1. Date: 12/20/2013 7:45:00 PM

    I love this. It's so raw and so beautiful. I have felt this way and letting go is so hard for me. This is very, very good and speaks to me<3 keep up the good work!

  1. Date: 12/4/2013 9:26:00 AM

    I can feel your heart when I read this poem. It makes me sad. I wish I could mend your hurting heart. But there is always a bright side to the darkest moments in life. The good memories are ones to cherish, and the bad memories only make you stronger. I love it when you put your full emotions into your poems.....Luv.....Roger

  1. Date: 11/30/2013 2:50:00 PM

    THIS POEM IS EXQUISITE!!!! I'M GOING THROUGH THIS NOW

  1. Date: 11/28/2013 10:41:00 AM

    Tenacious!

  1. Date: 11/11/2013 7:58:00 AM

    Love the way you express yourself bringing your poetry to life. thank you for that

  1. Date: 10/15/2013 4:32:00 AM

    When I found this poem, it was as though you were reading my mind. Lately, I've been thinking a lot about my past and the time I had to let go. It was so painful, but in my case, necessary. I could go on and on, but for everybody's sake, I won't.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 6:46:00 AM

    6/26/2013 is my 72d birthday. Keep the faith and certainly keep writing poems. That is what God made our minds for. I'm sure that God and you will agree. Just back from Disneyworld and vacation. Have been inactive for a week.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 6:45:00 AM

    6/26/2013 is my 72d birthday. Keep the faith and certainly keep writing poems. That is what God made our minds for. I'm sure that God and you will agree. Just back from Disneyworld and vacation. Have been inactive for a week.

  1. Date: 10/6/2013 6:40:00 AM

    Making me not my. Love it otherwise as usual.

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:06:00 AM

    Wow...As I read the poem, as I follow the feelings...I was also gobbled up by the emotion of the poet...I love this! (^_^) keep it up...You are my idol Linda

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:10:00 PM

    I absolutely LOVE this poem! I know all to well how you feel. I've been told that you find the best things in life when you let go. learning to let go is the hardest part.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 9:27:00 PM

    awesome.

  1. Date: 9/5/2013 4:43:00 PM

    This poem is definitely one that tugs at the heart strings. I can relate so well to this feeling....Great work on this piece!....Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "Near". Yes, it is just a poem, not reality...more of a metaphor of lost love...my poem, "Soul Mate" is very similar to it.

  1. Date: 9/1/2013 4:02:00 AM

    Hi Linda, a powerful poem about love and longing. Thanks; it's so touching ... and painful (which is ok, i can deal, baby). Hey, thanks for your comments on my site. Best today and all days, Don

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 4:33:00 AM

    this is a wonderful poem. It shows the torture of not wanting to let go. The imagery is brilliant. Linda x

  1. Date: 8/28/2013 1:14:00 PM

    My Dear Linda, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit."I sit, with a jar full of Tears,holding on tight." I can feel the emotion of sadness YOU express here "I won't let go" either Superb Quill How have YOU been? I missed YOU. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 10:42:00 PM

    thanks for explaining all that stuff about your avatar for me, Princess (I forgot what the A was again!) haha. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 8/13/2013 2:52:00 PM

    this is lovely Linda, heartfelt and very moving, a soul of a poem, which i just love

  1. Date: 8/12/2013 1:09:00 AM

    'Thank you for the nice comment on my poems...this poem is very well written and has a lot of depth and emotions..love this work'

  1. Date: 8/11/2013 9:23:00 PM

    Hi Linda, its been a while, been away in the arctic and just got back to read this great work of yours, you never dissappoint me my friend. I think hanging on is an inherited trait we all have. Very very profound, blessings Carl

  1. Date: 8/1/2013 8:53:00 AM

    My friend this is an outstanding piece of poetry, awesome writing, letting go, can be so hard many never let go, I know many of your readers will relate to this poem you are a very talented writer, sad but so perfectly written,, in my past there was a time I could not let go, the hurt and pain, but I found a great love that was the healer of all my pain, yes friend now I hand it all over to GOD, great write, blessings to you, sueellen

  1. Date: 7/30/2013 2:33:00 PM

    You know by now your words touch my inner soul.... Beautiful expression my dear Poet..xxx luv Michael

  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:37:00 AM

    That was so intense I loved it.Great work.Thanks for your comment to me.Luv,Sue

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 9:06:00 PM

    Take care of the soup and don't let people on here get to you.Love always and forever friends, Colleen

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 12:22:00 PM

    I am sorry. I am letting go. Cant deal with things anymore. Love always and smiling on you forever, Colleen

  1. Date: 7/28/2013 5:28:00 AM

    I am impressed by your work. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for your comment on "Murder" by the way.

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