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Red Sun

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Red Sun

Patriots' Heaven the red sun glows through white streaks of clouds on a blue canvas - a happy fourth of July written on dawn’s sky Written 6/25/13 for Russell Sivey's Red sun poetry contest

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  1. Date: 8/29/2013 2:17:00 AM

    What a lovely palette of colors and soft feelings you've created here, Andrea :)

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 8:02:00 AM

    I came here to see what went wrong with this poem.Beautiful Dodoitsu!

  1. Date: 7/24/2013 8:44:00 PM

    Nice one on the red sun. I looked at the contest but nothing was coming to my mind at the time.love phyl

  1. Date: 7/3/2013 6:47:00 AM

    Patriotic "optima forma" dodoitsu

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 5:36:00 AM

    nicely done my lady. Good luck in the contest. AO

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:01:00 PM

    Really liked the emotive scene/words here Andrea; I wish you a very happy 4th of july i suppose I will just be doing boring stuff; well apart from reading on 'soup' take care Joe..)

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:55:00 PM

    love this, my friend - a sure winner herre

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:09:00 AM

    Hey, Perfect thinking to make the holiday the theme!

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:49:00 PM

    nice timing....of course, you are always on key...thanks for the comment..am at the library, so just a short hello...all is ok

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 5:31:00 PM

    Oh this is awesome Andrea.....

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 9:23:00 AM

    How imaginative and patriotic! Just in time for the Fourth of July.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:11:00 AM

    Gorgeous, and so fitting for this time of year! Canada Day is July 1st, so we have a patriotic long weekend starting tonight :)

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 7:05:00 AM

    He will like this Andie. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 4:13:00 AM

    Nice going, darlin'. I think you penned a winner.... Love ya.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 12:17:00 AM

    lovely Andrea, so visual

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 11:00:00 PM

    This is clever utilizing red whie and blue. Should strike a chord with the judge. Well done Andrea!

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 7:13:00 PM

    Andrea your poem evokes mood of celebration. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:49:00 PM

    I can almost touch that flag fluttering away there, which reminds me, I'm off to England soon for a short while, I'd best scedadle, I don't need any more scrapes in those reinactments lol. I'll be gone before the 4th but I'll be thinking of y'all. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:14:00 PM

    What is "dawn’s sky"? the fire works, the mind? please tell what you are thinking, it has many meanings.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 1:48:00 PM

    Love the idea you used for your entry Andrea, almost celebration time for you with the 4th of July being around the corner ;) all the best for the contest. Love Wilma

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 10:18:00 AM

    Few of the folks I've come in contact with know anything about the 30s music - those wonderful old musicals - which makes me feel very old and, in a sad way, misunderstood. How does an old fart like me get up-do-date? Love, daver

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 10:05:00 AM

    Wonderful theme you have chosen and worded the excellent beauty. Good luck in the contest. I have changed my "I still owe him" just now. Please read and tell me. Loved always, bl

    devnath Avatar bl devnath Date: 6/27/2013 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Sorry, not Red Sun. I still owe him
  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:46:00 PM

    Very patriotic poem. I can't help but imagine lines of soldiers marching beneath this gigantic banner in the sky, hearts swelling with desire to serve their country at any cost. So much here that is unwritten! Nice work!

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 5:00:00 PM

    Soup mail Question.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 4:19:00 PM

    May this nations spirit once again be as beautiful as this poem. Wishing you a wonderful 4th.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 2:43:00 PM

    Interesting! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 9:50:00 AM

    Just right for adding a splash of vivid c0olor for the 4th. Jeanette McDonald and Nelson Eddy sang in all the 30s musicals - Blossom Time, The Desert Song, May Time,Rose Marie, Bittersweet and on and on. Few of the young men and women know much about them, but they were loaded with some of the finest music ever written. Love, daver

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 7:42:00 AM

    great poem Andrea.wishes for a win.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:44:00 PM

    Andrea, your special knack for a perfect picture shines through here. :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:22:00 PM

    Syllable count or no this is a beautiful poem with great imagery. Thank you so much for your praise of A Secret Never Told. And yes, every bit of it is absolutely true.

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