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Summer Passion

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Summer Passion

The bustle of summer during the day Youthful cottonwood tree blows all about I am seen speechless with nothing to say Where extreme heat of the year fills with doubt Warmth collaborating with the cotton Youthful cottonwood tree blows all about Expression loses glare with its beacon The luster of the summer pleads with hope Warmth collaborating with the cotton Romance explodes in this season elope We sit near this tree kissing by the leaves The luster of the summer pleads with hope All of our hearts seem to reach the top eaves Where the sun perks and goes harmonizing We sit near this tree kissing by the leaves Summer keeps us nestled, burnt rejoicing The bustle of summer during the day Where the sun perks and goes harmonizing I am seen speechless with nothing to say
Russell Sivey Contest: a poem that took more than a week to write Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A Started writing poem on 6/5/2013 Just finished today 6/25/2013

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  1. Date: 6/26/2013 10:49:00 PM

    I don't know about summer... but, I will complain... LOL, love the way you used the connect between us and cotton... collaboration... xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:17:00 AM

    a time-tested piece that wakes the delight of summer, russell... it will take me more than a week to create something less beautiful than this... your work's real strength is that this experience sresonates so deeply within you... radiant, greeat stufff!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:55:00 AM

    It was well worth the effort Russell.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:21:00 AM

    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed . Tfs

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:06:00 AM

    Very good poem on this challenging form Russell!Enjoyed the read.Best wishes in for the contest.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:24:00 AM

    If one day I find you to be speechless my friend, I think I would be so forlorn, my favorite line here is ALL OF OUR HEARTS seem to reach the top eaves, Glad you take our hearts up there with you, always your friend xxxVxxx

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 5:15:00 AM

    Interesting contest entry..Good luck..Since you spent this amount of time deciding exactly how it should go, reads like a winning entry to me..Thanks for the visits to my work..Your voice of encouragement is always there to lift me up when I am feeling down..I have dental and doctor's appointments today..The older I get the more I fall apart..Sara

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:43:00 AM

    Great write Russell ...Seren