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Dark Angel

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Dark Angel

Her radiance hidden from sight
the Dark Angel stalks the night
secret dark paths she follows
her quiver full of poison arrows

Searching for the evil hearts
to tear apart sweethearts
carry of the essence of soul
leaving the other without console

Flaming arrows of dark vengeance
seek souls without giving temperance
to a fiery dark hell she leads them 
there she chooses eternally to condemn

Thus beware of the Dark Angel
watch out with care for her Virgil
least you be next on the list
much better for you to be missed

       written 06/24/2013

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  1. Date: 8/8/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Wonderful well done I really enjoyed this! Laura :)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/8/2013 5:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Laura I like doing the odd dark poem ty for enjoying it Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:20:00 AM
    Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 8/8/2013 5:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oops missed this somehow sorry Linda ty for reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 7/1/2013 6:18:00 PM
    Shadow, you have such creativity for fantasy here. Love the title all the way through. You have captured a vision of dark angel perfectly:) Congrats on your win in the contest

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/3/2013 5:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Karen and ty congrats to you as well Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/30/2013 4:59:00 PM
    The fear of dark angels is not my concern - for I am assured I will not burn. - And when my time on earth here is o'er - I'm bound for my house on the other shore.-..... congrats, Shadow, on a great entry... Love ya dearly.... Jake

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 7/3/2013 5:05:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    may you find peaceful bliss Jake sounds delightful Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:47:00 PM
    Shadow, :-) Congratulations in the Rhyming contest. I'm enjoying all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/29/2013 5:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Skat you are so kind ty for congrats I will take a look at your blog Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 11:54:00 PM
    smooth flower, well rhymed, loved it a lot....:):):):)Adarsh

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/26/2013 7:57:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Adarsh welcome to Soup ty for visiting my work and your nice comments Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 4:06:00 PM
    Way to get yourself inspired and I have met the one who inspired this. I hope she gets to reads this!!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 4:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Andrea ty for looking at my work Shadow x smiles many things inspire +)
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 3:24:00 PM
    You put us in the spirit of things Shadow, Little shivers are creeping up, good shivers xxx

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 4:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Ty Vienna good shivers is ok lol Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:37:00 AM
    eerie and beautifully crafted, shadow... this mirrors the overall theme of darkness and sense of foreboding... incredible!..:) hugggs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 2:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Nette ty so much for stopping in appreciated Shadow
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:16:00 AM
    A scary topic, written with a pleasing cadence and fine couplet rhyming. Well done Shadow!! Best wishes, Keith

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 2:37:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Keith scary indeed ty for reading Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:08:00 AM
    It is poetry like this which is the reason you are doing so well in contests. Exceptional piece shadow.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 8:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    wow Richard such high praise ty so much I am overwhelmed Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:27:00 AM
    Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 8:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    ty Ravi so kind of you to take the time to read it Ty Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:20:00 AM
    Sinister and dark....Beautifully written, though! :) Thanks for your visit, Shadow...Glad to make the acquaintance....I sense there is a hopeless romantic residing in you as in me!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 8:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    always Eileen and child like beliefs lol ty so much Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:15:00 AM
    Interesting lines that you have penned in this one..Creatively unique one..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 8:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    love your work Sara keeps me from the house chores lol Ty so much Shadow x smiles
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:19:00 AM
    Nicely written. Is that Virgil Earp? Hi Shadow! Good luck at the contest. :) G.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 5:14:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Giorgio Ty so much I haven't put this in a contest maybe I will lol Shadow x smiles hug
  1. Date: 6/24/2013 11:56:00 PM
    Well written,,, my kind of dark story,,, like my grim reaper ;} thank you for liking my Pitch Perfect Dreams ;}

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/25/2013 5:16:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Debbie it was lovely yes a dark write good to do a couple now and then ty for reading Shadow x smiles