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  1. Date: 6/27/2013 5:51:00 PM
    Gail your words touched me deeply....amazing and beautiful write that makes one reconsider before moving on. Hugs

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 8:29:00 AM
    This is great and beautiful, but if something faded I don't think I want to turn back and see. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:08:00 PM
    This is a wondrous, moving, heartfelt poem. The reader cannot help but feel the emotions filling it

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:30:00 PM
    Wonderful poem and a thought provoking write Gail.Enjoyed the read.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:53:00 AM
    tightly- woven. gripping sadness,that I can feel it right here in the Philippines.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 7:51:00 AM
    Very moving Gail. You are very talented, I am moved by these words.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:48:00 AM
    Gail this is tremendous ...Seren

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 9:22:00 PM
    This is a tremendous and amazing write my friend! I love how you wove the fading entity all throughout your poem, a very powerful sway between allowing the entity to fade or not! You have interestingly shown this enlightenment of this piece here this evening my friend! Great Work!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Tremendous questions & statements presented here. Wonderful job!