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Indisposed

Abdulhafeez Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

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Indisposed

-Folly in Grin-

Sleeping troubadour
Ask his ink why he slumber
Or his papyrus
Words they themselves would forget
Since their lord is indisposed


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  1. Date: 12/8/2013 7:00:00 PM

    Very nice. I like the use of personification in this piece. Well done.

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 12/8/2013 7:25:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for the visit, Gary.
  1. Date: 7/7/2013 11:27:00 AM

    Congratulations, with your winning poem .... xox~ PD

  1. Date: 7/1/2013 9:00:00 PM

    Enjoyed this again AO...Congratulations

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 11:11:00 PM

    Congrats A.O.....Seren

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 4:12:00 PM

    Very deep an moving with the picture of lost words .

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:36:00 PM

    Andulhafeez, :-) Congratulations in my awesome SECRET contest. don't know if the secret is totally out. I'm loving all the winners & poems that spoke to me in their own way. enjoy my blog if you like, peace and love. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~

    Oyewole Avatar Abdulhafeez Oyewole Date: 6/29/2013 5:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for my placement. I'll check your blog to see my spot and who made it to your list. Peace and love to you too. AO
  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:19:00 PM

    lovely write - congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 2:48:00 PM

    Thanks everyone for dropping by. I'm grateful.

  1. Date: 6/28/2013 10:46:00 AM

    aha! what a piece...

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:06:00 AM

    Witty...loved it...:):):):)Adarsh

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:04:00 AM

    I love this piece, you have skills my friend.

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:27:00 AM

    hey, this is very clever and unique!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 5:29:00 PM

    Perfect TANKA construction... exceptional word use... to me there is a mystical feel to the piece. Well done my friend!! Best wishes, Keith

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 4:30:00 PM

    Abdulhafez, This is a powerful piece! Very original, enjoyed reading it! Hakim

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 9:40:00 AM

    I also enjoyed this clever write...making me smile...wonderful job...thank you

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 9:14:00 AM

    Abdulhafeez, I enjoyed reading your tanka. a clever and wise message... he is the all mighty, that is why!. xox~ LINDA

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 9:12:00 AM

    Good morning My sweet friend,,, miss coming around here.. thank you for the warm smile your visit gave.. :-)

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 8:53:00 AM

    Your poems so unique.......the words you choose so exceptional !! Wonderfully well done!

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Cute one..Got a chuckle..Very uniquely created work..Thanks for the visit to my work and taking time to leave a comment..Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:28:00 AM

    wonderful choices of word make this exceptional Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:14:00 AM

    :) Quite mystical this! :) I like the mix of words here, A.O.... Thanks for your visits to my work! I appreciate it! :) PS...I'm never indisposed for a visit! :)

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:55:00 AM

    fine thoughts penned in the deepest part of you, i enjoyed your tanka abdul xxxvxxx

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:38:00 AM

    Another fine piece.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:34:00 AM

    I read your subtitle as Folly in Gin which strangely enough could fit your piece. Excellent stretching of our imaginations. This is very good. Thanks too, for your recent comments on my postings.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:33:00 AM

    great tanka AO....best wishes