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Red Sun

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Red Sun

Gods weary red sleepy eye
opening, turning darkness
back to lovely blue bird skies
watching over me

©Donna Jones
6-23-2013

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  1. Date: 7/29/2013 11:39:00 AM

    To every day there is a reason and now I understand. The only thing I need to know is that it's by God's hand.

  1. Date: 7/26/2013 12:39:00 AM

    a wow poem. Big congrats.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:39:00 PM

    That's a WOW WOW thanks.

  1. Date: 7/25/2013 2:29:00 PM

    Donna.... congrats *****SKAT

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 5:55:00 PM

    Nice imagery with a sense of comfort. Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 12:29:00 PM

    Congrats on your win, my friend. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 7/23/2013 11:08:00 AM

    congrats on a fine win Donna

  1. Date: 7/11/2013 12:23:00 AM

    Oh, I like the wording here Donna ;} thank you for coming to read my Living Life ;}

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 9:30:00 AM

    Very nice having cool in hot Sun's adoration. Lovely done. Good luck in the contest. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 5:48:00 PM

    Pretty way to describe a morning sunrise.

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 6:42:00 AM

    Beautiful... Good luck in the contest... Jack

  1. Date: 6/27/2013 2:30:00 AM

    I love the confident faith with shines through your poem, Donna... Go well, David

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 8:13:00 AM

    Hi Donna, great write.GOD is there.

  1. Date: 6/26/2013 2:23:00 AM

    I really like this !Good luck in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:51:00 PM

    engrossed by this winsome piece... splendid, donna..:) huggs

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 6/25/2013 9:48:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you very much....you give me wings to keep trying...
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 12:23:00 PM

    OH, MD......Yes, He is watching over us. How beautiful this is! Missed ya! Hope all is well....Good luck in the contest!

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 6/25/2013 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi beautiful....yes things are OK....so busy is all...glad you liked it..you know this is obviously my first try at this form but its the only way to learn..right?
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:12:00 AM

    Beautiful

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 6/25/2013 9:51:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks!
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 10:03:00 AM

    Very...very cool, Donna. I'm a fan of these little jags. Good luck in the contest. Oh, and the rattler you asked about...it was a rare occasion in which I wasn't carrying a pistol, so I bashed his head with a stick of firewood...took some pictures...then ate him...ha...I'm such a redneck..;)

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 6/25/2013 9:52:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Yummy...and hatband too....and I is one too
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 8:06:00 AM

    Good morning Donna

    Jones Avatar Donna Jones Date: 6/25/2013 9:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Richard...good evening..now..
  1. Date: 6/25/2013 6:55:00 AM

    Hi Donna, Short and sweet but carries the message well. John

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 8:03:00 PM

    Hey Donna, Lovely poem, Thanks for the sweet comments On my page! Hakim

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 7:20:00 PM

    Every thing looks OK and reads beautifully. I'm pulling for you.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:31:00 PM

    lovely Donna gl in contest Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 10:17:00 AM

    Very pretty stuff, Donna. daver

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 6:32:00 AM

    Good morning Donna, I think this poem will do well. It has a very good flow and I like the metophor.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 2:26:00 AM

    How lovely this is. Well done Donna and Good luck in the contest. AO